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Stillness
We move the speed of presence --
no moment better or less
by what is taken or left in growth
Poetry imitates natural being
no value heightened or reduced
for brevity or expanded length
It's a Spirit, feeling beyond
beating existence of word cavities
excavating marrow from space. . .
fertilizing bones of cell
into that first breath of Poem
inseminating the womb of us;
secrets of the Universe
lie not in the written or performed
but, in what is not seen or heard;
Silence is the deepest verse:
the holy grail of knowledge
sipped only by a stillness of self
~
no moment better or less
by what is taken or left in growth
Poetry imitates natural being
no value heightened or reduced
for brevity or expanded length
It's a Spirit, feeling beyond
beating existence of word cavities
excavating marrow from space. . .
fertilizing bones of cell
into that first breath of Poem
inseminating the womb of us;
secrets of the Universe
lie not in the written or performed
but, in what is not seen or heard;
Silence is the deepest verse:
the holy grail of knowledge
sipped only by a stillness of self
~
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Re. Stillness
25th May 2018 7:00pm
A well written description of the Muse in a natural state , Ahavati ;
Well penned , and put to cybersheet...especially liked this :
"It's a Spirit, feeling beyond
beating existence of word cavities
excavating marrow from space. . .
fertilizing bones of cell
into that first breath of Poem
inseminating the womb of us;"
Well penned , and put to cybersheet...especially liked this :
"It's a Spirit, feeling beyond
beating existence of word cavities
excavating marrow from space. . .
fertilizing bones of cell
into that first breath of Poem
inseminating the womb of us;"
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Re. Stillness
Anonymous
- Edited 25th May 2018 7:55pm
25th May 2018 7:53pm
"We move the speed of presence --"
WOW. What a way to start off a poem. One can't move beyond the moment one is in.
"Poetry imitates natural being
no value heightened or reduced
for brevity or expanded length"
Poetry is life's equivalent in words. Again. WOW.
"secrets of the Universe
lie not in the written or performed
but, in what is not seen or heard;
Silence is the deepest verse:
the holy grail of knowledge
sipped only by a stillness of self"
And the key to making the known unknown is to be still and quiet outside .... and within to .... listen .......
Amazing poetry, Darling. 😙💋
I Love You. 💜
WOW. What a way to start off a poem. One can't move beyond the moment one is in.
"Poetry imitates natural being
no value heightened or reduced
for brevity or expanded length"
Poetry is life's equivalent in words. Again. WOW.
"secrets of the Universe
lie not in the written or performed
but, in what is not seen or heard;
Silence is the deepest verse:
the holy grail of knowledge
sipped only by a stillness of self"
And the key to making the known unknown is to be still and quiet outside .... and within to .... listen .......
Amazing poetry, Darling. 😙💋
I Love You. 💜
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Re: Re. Stillness
25th May 2018 10:35pm
Re. Stillness
25th May 2018 11:23pm
poetry imitates nature ?
not according to oscar it don't
but what the hell
I'm still wilde
about the poem ..
not according to oscar it don't
but what the hell
I'm still wilde
about the poem ..
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Re: Re. Stillness
26th May 2018 00:57am
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
27th May 2018 4:33pm
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Re: Re. Stillness
27th May 2018 4:47pm
Thank you, Harleea. Always enjoy your interpretations. ❤ 📝
Happy Memorial Day weekends to you. 📅🇺🇸
Happy Memorial Day weekends to you. 📅🇺🇸
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
27th May 2018 4:56pm
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Re. Stillness
28th May 2018 2:13am
This flows nicely, that last line is great, I can feel the deep appreciation of poetry in this and it is an inspiration to writers to read such profound reflections..
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Re: Re. Stillness
28th May 2018 2:14am
Re. Stillness
29th May 2018 9:49pm
Oh bravo lady! Bravo!
I almost didn't scroll down far enough to catch this gem, but I'm glad I did :) Long time no see on here. I'm unsurprised to see you kicking words into high gear as usual!
I almost didn't scroll down far enough to catch this gem, but I'm glad I did :) Long time no see on here. I'm unsurprised to see you kicking words into high gear as usual!
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29th May 2018 10:01pm
Re. Stillness
8th Jun 2018 00:15am