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Pretender's Toast
If poets
only hunt their
death
'cause
death is what
redeems them;
and
if my few words
to symbols
only answer,
my life won't be
worth a damn
until
within your arms
I
die...
only hunt their
death
'cause
death is what
redeems them;
and
if my few words
to symbols
only answer,
my life won't be
worth a damn
until
within your arms
I
die...
Published 24th May 2018
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Yeah, it gets kinda comical. I just dove into that a bit and it's actually draining. Going back into the mindset of a suicidal teen...not poet mind you....
When you are young and depressed...ok, sometimes teenagers get depressed...
Getting stuck in it or cultivating the self image because it is trendy and it generates attention....Nowadays I would rather piss in the fireplace like Jackson Pollack.
I do have a thing for Vincent price in the old Poe movies though.
Anyway....blabla.... I get what you are saying.
A.
When you are young and depressed...ok, sometimes teenagers get depressed...
Getting stuck in it or cultivating the self image because it is trendy and it generates attention....Nowadays I would rather piss in the fireplace like Jackson Pollack.
I do have a thing for Vincent price in the old Poe movies though.
Anyway....blabla.... I get what you are saying.
A.
25th May 2018 4:19pm
25th May 2018 00:53am
25th May 2018 4:21pm
Intense... absolute intense..this love, this ultimate search of it through words n death, this poetic journey called life in traversed painscaped truths....n how you signify this in such potent brevity when u put ur own uniquely wordistic art at stake only in hopes of mergence with that love that death ..
"and
if my few words
to symbols
only answer," ..aw this! I feel this .that hazy feltness of sync is the key than all the deconstructed equations .. love is an excruciating enigma..n how better to feel this than words death pain truth ...#juzme in intense blabbers dear adored Takis..i loved this piece in ur inimitable way of saying!! bows ..
"and
if my few words
to symbols
only answer," ..aw this! I feel this .that hazy feltness of sync is the key than all the deconstructed equations .. love is an excruciating enigma..n how better to feel this than words death pain truth ...#juzme in intense blabbers dear adored Takis..i loved this piece in ur inimitable way of saying!! bows ..
25th May 2018 4:25pm
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