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Palms
It wasn't the palms
pressed flat against
the wallpaper
that caught my eye,
it was the offering,
slightly bent forward
knee length nylons
-my favourite shade of blue
and your bare ass
calling for
immediate attention.
I set my briefcase down
remove my suit jacket
and roll up my sleeves.
Your rounded perfection
swaying for me;
impatience.
pressed flat against
the wallpaper
that caught my eye,
it was the offering,
slightly bent forward
knee length nylons
-my favourite shade of blue
and your bare ass
calling for
immediate attention.
I set my briefcase down
remove my suit jacket
and roll up my sleeves.
Your rounded perfection
swaying for me;
impatience.
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Re. Palms
Anonymous
24th May 2018 11:47am
Oh wow....very hot ....more ....more...more!
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Re: Re. Palms
24th May 2018 11:23pm
Re. Palms
Anonymous
24th May 2018 12:24pm
This is some pretty classy erotica. I’m impressed. There’s something so sterile and yet visceral all melded together in this write. It’s quite ingenious in its own strange little way.
Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for sharing.
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Re: Re. Palms
24th May 2018 11:25pm
Appreciate the kudos, especially from such an incredible word weaver as yourself. Thanks for the RL add.
Re. Palms
24th May 2018 3:30pm
You seem to have her positioned very nicely sir - with such insouciance too!
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Re: Re. Palms
24th May 2018 11:27pm
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Re. Palms
26th May 2018 7:56pm
I love it. Your offering is very erotic without the need for sexually graphic words..
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