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gratitude
old car
started
today
copyright 2018 RR Zinn. No part this poem may be used or reproduced without permission of its author.
Published 19th May 2018
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19th May 2018 10:00pm
19th May 2018 10:12pm
20th May 2018 4:09am
Yeah, same here...can relate. Mine is an ongoing project.
Everytime a new noise pops up I get puckered.
Everytime a new noise pops up I get puckered.
20th May 2018 4:16am
I haven't been puckered in a long time.
Here to all of us who aren't driving a Tesla.
buddhakitty.
Here to all of us who aren't driving a Tesla.
buddhakitty.
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
20th May 2018 7:21am
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20th May 2018 12:43pm
20th May 2018 1:43pm
20th May 2018 10:17pm
I am that old car... especially first thing, before I get warmed up.
Whether you intended to or not... you have described the plight of the chronologically gifted... it's the mileage as gets to you... not the years.
Whether you intended to or not... you have described the plight of the chronologically gifted... it's the mileage as gets to you... not the years.
20th May 2018 10:32pm
