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Kisses Below
We met under the shadow of the moon
You didn't even know my name
You've kissed the cold blizzard from my lips
No other kiss will ever be the same
You've blessed me with kisses below
And I saw the universe open her eyes
Waters boiled and began to flow
What a beautiful, chaotic surprise
We met under the shadow of the moon
I didn't even know your name
You've kissed the cold blizzard from my lips
No other kiss will ever be the same
You didn't even know my name
You've kissed the cold blizzard from my lips
No other kiss will ever be the same
You've blessed me with kisses below
And I saw the universe open her eyes
Waters boiled and began to flow
What a beautiful, chaotic surprise
We met under the shadow of the moon
I didn't even know your name
You've kissed the cold blizzard from my lips
No other kiss will ever be the same
Published 18th May 2018
Author's Note
Poem by Poetry On Purpose for Kiss Competition
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18th May 2018 8:40pm
Sounds like song about an opportune nocturnal hook up. ("We met...you didn't even know my name") Favourite lines - for conveying the tingling effect:
You've blessed me with kisses below
And I saw the universe open her eyes
Waters boiled and began to flow
What a beautiful, chaotic surprise
You've blessed me with kisses below
And I saw the universe open her eyes
Waters boiled and began to flow
What a beautiful, chaotic surprise
19th May 2018 3:03am
Anonymous
18th May 2018 10:20pm
This has lovely imagery to it...Great write!
19th May 2018 3:01am
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