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Maturity over Prematurity
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He'd say the Love of his life,
the one, his whole life with,
Amongst over words that
Love can provide once in Love
Some could argue at the
prematurity of the wording
I doubt they'd see it as
premature but mature
Old & experienced enough
to know it feels complete & right
People can have their say,
& they probably will in their
own homes
It's not that important against
a relationship with built over
time unbreakable foundations
People can have their say,
Jealousy affects many
I'll not be bothered to be
concerned of their thinking.
He'd say the Love of his life,
the one, his whole life with,
Amongst over words that
Love can provide once in Love
Some could argue at the
prematurity of the wording
I doubt they'd see it as
premature but mature
Old & experienced enough
to know it feels complete & right
People can have their say,
& they probably will in their
own homes
It's not that important against
a relationship with built over
time unbreakable foundations
People can have their say,
Jealousy affects many
I'll not be bothered to be
concerned of their thinking.
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