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A Mess
The human race is in a mess
our minds are twisted
even our own thoughts
are not our own...we even
hate each other and that
is not human at all...we
don't know who we are
anymore...not so many
human beings are taking
any of the trouble we
are seeing everywhere
very serious and the mess
keeps getting worse
our minds are twisted
even our own thoughts
are not our own...we even
hate each other and that
is not human at all...we
don't know who we are
anymore...not so many
human beings are taking
any of the trouble we
are seeing everywhere
very serious and the mess
keeps getting worse
Published 13th May 2018
Author's Note
oh this is only a thought I was having but you could work a lot of truth into it if you looked it all over carefully
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19th Jun 2018 8:18pm
Humans are very complex creatures and prideful. It's those characteristics that often lead to disaster.
Great thought-provoking poem!
Great thought-provoking poem!
28th Jun 2018 4:57am
30th Jun 2018 4:44am
I wrote some poems on addiction starting with
the worst thing you can do
to a human being is too
belittle them...crush them
subconsciously...this is how
the NAZI'S worked it
anyway I wrote some poems telling people they never had a disease
because they were now addicted they were weak
but it does not appear addicts get much support
the worst thing you can do
to a human being is too
belittle them...crush them
subconsciously...this is how
the NAZI'S worked it
anyway I wrote some poems telling people they never had a disease
because they were now addicted they were weak
but it does not appear addicts get much support
