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Rough Play
She accepts so much from him
Subjected to his every whim
Posing on the double bed
Then kneeling when she gives him head
He orders her to puff her lips
If teeth applied, then not the tips
Her tongue undulating like a snake
Might be as much as he can take
But he shoves in his swollen cock
And she damn near goes into shock
Her throat isn't deep enough
So he takes it to her "darling muff"
He pumps her 'til she starts to scream
Less a fuck, and more a ream
Not quite her idea of fun
He has a cock, but she a gun.
Photo by Keith Wright
Subjected to his every whim
Posing on the double bed
Then kneeling when she gives him head
He orders her to puff her lips
If teeth applied, then not the tips
Her tongue undulating like a snake
Might be as much as he can take
But he shoves in his swollen cock
And she damn near goes into shock
Her throat isn't deep enough
So he takes it to her "darling muff"
He pumps her 'til she starts to scream
Less a fuck, and more a ream
Not quite her idea of fun
He has a cock, but she a gun.
Photo by Keith Wright
Author's Note
Noir core, maybe?
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Re. Rough Play
12th May 2018 7:31pm
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12th May 2018 10:45pm
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14th May 2018 9:53pm
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Anonymous
12th May 2018 11:37pm
My Lovely Sir Crow- noir core indeed and I like it! Different spin to your quill here but still would be unmistakeable...well done!! I can hear the hammer pull and engage...I love you! With much love - Taryn xoxo
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14th May 2018 9:55pm
Thanks for the great comment, Taryn. Love you too! Glad my pen isn't firing a blank here...
Re. Rough Play
13th May 2018 3:11am
damn crow you had me at the title. this was super fun I enjoyed this big time. <3
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Re: Re. Rough Play
14th May 2018 9:58pm
Glad you enjoyed, mysteriouslady. I love to cook up titles. Maybe I'll do a follow up called "Rough Prey." Or maybe not.
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15th May 2018 2:12am
Re. Rough Play
13th May 2018 5:20am
And... that’s only the beginning, to the ending !
A fine write, dear Sir ~ 🌹😎🎈🌞
A fine write, dear Sir ~ 🌹😎🎈🌞
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14th May 2018 10:03pm
Re. Rough Play
13th May 2018 8:29pm
dearest Sir Crow
this is some hot play here
you rocked this one ;)
love Raven
this is some hot play here
you rocked this one ;)
love Raven
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14th May 2018 10:05pm
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Anonymous
15th May 2018 3:50am
Wow Crow.......this comes to ......she’s wicked with her aim.......this is mind twisting.....great ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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16th May 2018 9:29pm