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The weasel
The sneezels of weasels don't ever pleasels -
It rips their panties to bits
It's worse than coughing in fits
And often gives them nasty diseasels.
Published 11th May 2018
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11th May 2018 9:32am
So AA Milne is my personal favourite poet ever. Binker is my favourite poem (info overload I know)
I am in awe with what you've done with his marvelous Sneazles thought and while limiting it you crammed it full of punch.
Really enjoy this. Thank you for the read.
Al.
I am in awe with what you've done with his marvelous Sneazles thought and while limiting it you crammed it full of punch.
Really enjoy this. Thank you for the read.
Al.
11th May 2018 10:56am
11th May 2018 12:20pm
Welcome back! Well done but a bit intimidating!
Agree with Al on AA Milne; however, must throw Dr Suess and Antoine de Saint-Exupéry in the mix too! These mold little ( and big ) minds!
Agree with Al on AA Milne; however, must throw Dr Suess and Antoine de Saint-Exupéry in the mix too! These mold little ( and big ) minds!
11th May 2018 9:37pm
Agree with Ahavati and RevolutionAL. Go back to the easel for your next piece.
