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Sometimes All A Person Can Say To You
Sometimes Brouhaha And Hullabaloo
Are All Some Person Can Say To You
Communication Is Their Commotion
They Pray In A Den Of Din Of Devotion ,
Words Fall As Flat As A Crushed Top Hat
I Got A Verbal Shotgun With My Doormat
Their Eyes Just See Askance In Periphery
A Sideways Glance With Shifty Scrutiny
An Unkindness In Their Self Blindness
A Refusal To Consider They Need To Confess ,
A Lack Of Compassion And Loving Action
To Those They Attack , Rather Than Address
So I Just Stuff Their Words , Verbal Trash Compaction !
https://vocaroo.com/i/s04FLfTOjkjF
Are All Some Person Can Say To You
Communication Is Their Commotion
They Pray In A Den Of Din Of Devotion ,
Words Fall As Flat As A Crushed Top Hat
I Got A Verbal Shotgun With My Doormat
Their Eyes Just See Askance In Periphery
A Sideways Glance With Shifty Scrutiny
An Unkindness In Their Self Blindness
A Refusal To Consider They Need To Confess ,
A Lack Of Compassion And Loving Action
To Those They Attack , Rather Than Address
So I Just Stuff Their Words , Verbal Trash Compaction !
https://vocaroo.com/i/s04FLfTOjkjF
Published 11th May 2018
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
11th May 2018 1:25am
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11th May 2018 2:08am
Thank You John , I agree , the verbal dimension
of a voice file , adds depth , not felt by words alone ...;)
of a voice file , adds depth , not felt by words alone ...;)
11th May 2018 1:52am
We must know the same kind of people...drama drama everywhere and very little Dharmaand8feetofhell
11th May 2018 2:16am
I believe we know at least a few , Buddhakitty !
Thank you for your comments !
It is amazing how many refuse to see the bigger
picture , and would rather fight between each other ;
I have hopes for this world still , yet I shall fight as I
see the need to , stupidity , and prejudicial thinking !
Thank you for your comments !
It is amazing how many refuse to see the bigger
picture , and would rather fight between each other ;
I have hopes for this world still , yet I shall fight as I
see the need to , stupidity , and prejudicial thinking !
they have no problem speaking normal around everyone else....what creates drama? Misunderstanding. Or speaking what some others might be thinking ?What is it they need to confess? Maybe you should be specific....im sure some of us have a long list
11th May 2018 2:06am
That is an opinion , Whipped...
I respect that is your opinion , yet we have different
experiences , and interactions with different people ,
which colors ones perspective and perception...
I know people and have dealt with many , who thrive
on creating chaos and problems...
Perhaps not you , as I cannot speak for you , nor would
I want to speak for someone else...
I can only speak from , and for , my own experiences ,
or myself...ultimately , that is all you can do , as well...;)
I respect that is your opinion , yet we have different
experiences , and interactions with different people ,
which colors ones perspective and perception...
I know people and have dealt with many , who thrive
on creating chaos and problems...
Perhaps not you , as I cannot speak for you , nor would
I want to speak for someone else...
I can only speak from , and for , my own experiences ,
or myself...ultimately , that is all you can do , as well...;)
Since you added a question , by modifying
your reply , their lack of compassion and loving action...
I cannot explain it better than that...
If you cannot or refuse to understand that , that is not my lack...
You keep changing / modifying your post / reply , Whipped ,
as though you have some hidden agenda...
Care to list your grudges against me , and what I post or
think ?
Then I might just consider answering you again...
Otherwise I recommend you go back and read one of your
past poems , about not being nasty...;)
your reply , their lack of compassion and loving action...
I cannot explain it better than that...
If you cannot or refuse to understand that , that is not my lack...
You keep changing / modifying your post / reply , Whipped ,
as though you have some hidden agenda...
Care to list your grudges against me , and what I post or
think ?
Then I might just consider answering you again...
Otherwise I recommend you go back and read one of your
past poems , about not being nasty...;)
11th May 2018 5:06am
Yeah Backwolf, energy invaders and suckers....attention junkies...a lot of hot air. I dodge the hits and vote with my feet. When I am on my own turf or cornered I will fight. I hope to chose my battles wisely. Someone here in the forum attacking me... I would gently suggest to send me a private message and I'll be glad to hash it out away from public eyes. So far this has not come to pass.
Thanx for the poem
Thanx for the poem
11th May 2018 5:09am
as far as i know i dont think i have a grudge against you...but then again you might want to confirm who you are before hand. please be honest, why do you think i would have a grudge???
11th May 2018 6:08am
As far as I know , we do not know each other ,
other than here...it just seems from a few of your
posts in my poem threads , like attacks...
I am responding in like form , just wondering why ;
I do thank you for taking the word "bullcrap" , off
the beginning of your original post here...
That did not set a good tone to start off...we OK ?
other than here...it just seems from a few of your
posts in my poem threads , like attacks...
I am responding in like form , just wondering why ;
I do thank you for taking the word "bullcrap" , off
the beginning of your original post here...
That did not set a good tone to start off...we OK ?
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
11th May 2018 6:23am
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11th May 2018 9:43am
I'd say that was worth more than two cents , Melia !
...LOL...
Yeah , sometimes , as I have a form of synesthesia ,
it is just as you described...
It is as well , like Jack Nicholson in the movie "Wolf" ,
when a business rival is trying to steal his wife and
girlfriend , he turns toward him in the urinal , and
pisses on his leg...I so loved and related to that !
Thanks for the comment !
...LOL...
Yeah , sometimes , as I have a form of synesthesia ,
it is just as you described...
It is as well , like Jack Nicholson in the movie "Wolf" ,
when a business rival is trying to steal his wife and
girlfriend , he turns toward him in the urinal , and
pisses on his leg...I so loved and related to that !
Thanks for the comment !
