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30 Seconds
You have 30 seconds to tell me you love me
Above ground on the subway
Heading into the tunnel
I love you ...
Above ground on the subway
Heading into the tunnel
I love you ...
Published 8th May 2018
| Edited 7th Sep 2019
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8th May 2018 4:37pm
Why do we always wait until the last minute to let someone know how we feel...
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Anonymous
8th May 2018 5:38pm
Never make them wait, that's my motto. Never had to contend with a subway before though. Love this one :-)
...Willow
...Willow
8th May 2018 7:35pm
8th May 2018 6:45pm
No pressure there....ok... Fine....can we arm wrestle or thumb wrestle for it or something?
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9th May 2018 00:35am
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Anonymous
9th May 2018 3:38pm
Time limits cause me to panic so personally, I just say those words whenever they fly into my head, whether life is being rushed or not...because hey, you never know...
Express it like
- S
xxx
Express it like
- S
xxx
11th May 2018 11:56pm
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13th May 2018 6:44pm
things said and love promised in the dark are not to be trusted - just saying (lol)
Huge Like :-)))))))
Huge Like :-)))))))
13th May 2018 7:31pm
I know you love me, admit it ....
Remember that fried Mars Bar we had together
Remember that fried Mars Bar we had together
13th May 2018 7:44pm
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