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Satisfying
lost in the mists
of thinking thinking
cogitating
sinking sinking
swirling round
and round and round
imagining
I hear the sounds
that you were making
in the morning
satisfying
juices pouring
oozing dripping
from between
your wet lips...
you're a dream
you're an angel
you're a deva
with your power
you're a weaver
fantasies
are tapestries
made by fingers
as they tease
your desires
with sensations
tingling tingling
exclamations
moans and groans
and sighs release
ooo's and ahhh's
designed to please
of thinking thinking
cogitating
sinking sinking
swirling round
and round and round
imagining
I hear the sounds
that you were making
in the morning
satisfying
juices pouring
oozing dripping
from between
your wet lips...
you're a dream
you're an angel
you're a deva
with your power
you're a weaver
fantasies
are tapestries
made by fingers
as they tease
your desires
with sensations
tingling tingling
exclamations
moans and groans
and sighs release
ooo's and ahhh's
designed to please
Published 8th May 2018
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inspired by S
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8th May 2018 6:30am
8th May 2018 2:33pm
8th May 2018 9:18am
Agree with wise Solomon ... that verse is particular sweet ... nice write again my dear poet
8th May 2018 2:34pm
8th May 2018 11:14am
I also agree with Solomon and LilD that that verse is beautiful. I also think that combination of theses two paint a vivid picture:
“...you're an angel
you're a deva
with your power
you're a weaver
fantasies
are tapestries
made by fingers
as they tease...”
“...you're an angel
you're a deva
with your power
you're a weaver
fantasies
are tapestries
made by fingers
as they tease...”
8th May 2018 2:36pm
Wonderful to hear from you (how's the garden growing?)...thanks for taking the time to comment Roxanne
8th May 2018 2:52pm
The garden is doing like any other; grows and flourish only to dry and wither, to be replaced and start the cycle again.
I try to comment when I can but sometimes other poets express how beautiful your writing is that a comment from me would be redundant.
I try to comment when I can but sometimes other poets express how beautiful your writing is that a comment from me would be redundant.
8th May 2018 2:59pm
you are never redundant and always a welcome presence ...looking forward to more of your own stimulating works...
Lawrence
Lawrence
8th May 2018 8:17pm
8th May 2018 8:37pm
9th May 2018 2:23am
with your fingers you should be playing with her lower lips as a singer does whilst playing it like a harp maybe lovely exotic poetry lovely you tube in it we all sail along the slippery rail and once released wag our tail ready for another one more time derail..she may say hold it a wee bit longer what mine no time before we finally sexsationally wet as rainy roll cumm over all over ye and me be happy we are two really lovely ...Thanks for the inspiration I am also now cumming to see your you in and out tube your first erotically cummig ...LAWRENCE are you from or of ARABIA
Anonymous
9th May 2018 3:12am
Shoot me, this was sweet as anything I've read all day or ever! 2nd thought, no shooting lol.
9th May 2018 3:30am
I'm happy you enjoyed this...shooting doesn't have to involve guns or bullets,,,,hehehe
Lawrence
Lawrence
