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Burn me at the stake for what i am!
tear down the walls,
these doors,
throwing them for fuel on the fire!
feelings consume me as disease.
let us suppress desires,
suppress this Love.
happiness is fictional,
but a dream worth dying for.
split at the seems,
i'll always be yours.
tear down the walls,
these doors,
throwing them for fuel on the fire!
feelings consume me as disease.
let us suppress desires,
suppress this Love.
happiness is fictional,
but a dream worth dying for.
split at the seems,
i'll always be yours.
Published 6th May 2018
| Edited 7th May 2018
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6th May 2018 10:21pm
"Burn me at the steak for what i am!"
And *that* is the meat of the matter
Said the mad hatter , want some tease ?
Nice Wordplay Sir Samael !
And *that* is the meat of the matter
Said the mad hatter , want some tease ?
Nice Wordplay Sir Samael !
7th May 2018 00:57am
"Happiness is fictional, but a dream worth dying for"...a suppression of desire, but love the tight ending: "I'll always be yours."
How'd you write my life story, Samael?
How'd you write my life story, Samael?
7th May 2018 7:47am
dearest Samael
one of your most passionate writes..
your love reaches out from the pages
and makes a woman ache for this type of devotion..
love Crim
one of your most passionate writes..
your love reaches out from the pages
and makes a woman ache for this type of devotion..
love Crim
Is that your birth date or telephone number dear Samael?
I could feel your emotions..."feelings consume me as disease"...sometimes I felt that too, it was just great torture...
" let us suppress desires,
suppress this Love. "--Love the true expression of this...that's because the mass affection sometimes is overwhelming ...but how about just let it be what it should be...loving someone is not that bad I think.
Well written dear Samael!
love
Jasmine
I could feel your emotions..."feelings consume me as disease"...sometimes I felt that too, it was just great torture...
" let us suppress desires,
suppress this Love. "--Love the true expression of this...that's because the mass affection sometimes is overwhelming ...but how about just let it be what it should be...loving someone is not that bad I think.
Well written dear Samael!
love
Jasmine
15th Jun 2018 3:01pm
"happiness is fictional,/but a dream worth dying for." ... great line my poet ...
