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Bullet-blasts of wisdom piercing holes in the soul
For one brief moment in time
I danced with my dream
And now,
All I want to do
Is go back to sleep.
I was but a moment of her life...
Nameless...Faceless...
But she left a permanent mark;
On my hard beating heart.
A shadow on the memory of paradise.
What once were wild energies;
Enveloped in wondrous reveries,
Are now cauterized gashes;
On a heart turning to ashes;
By attempts to lobotomize memories.
With my third eye pried open wide...
The vantablack void sucks the stars from the sky;
like a helpless child watching mama die.
I damned my destiny with my decisions...
"Shed your skin and step free from your prison"
Like whispers on the wind, the void calls me in.
Shadows break-through;
staining the sullen moon..
Ethereal whispers;
Rise high from the sky-mind..
Timeless paradigms redefined..
An astral body..born anew;
Redesigned of the infinite divine.
I danced with my dream
And now,
All I want to do
Is go back to sleep.
I was but a moment of her life...
Nameless...Faceless...
But she left a permanent mark;
On my hard beating heart.
A shadow on the memory of paradise.
What once were wild energies;
Enveloped in wondrous reveries,
Are now cauterized gashes;
On a heart turning to ashes;
By attempts to lobotomize memories.
With my third eye pried open wide...
The vantablack void sucks the stars from the sky;
like a helpless child watching mama die.
I damned my destiny with my decisions...
"Shed your skin and step free from your prison"
Like whispers on the wind, the void calls me in.
Shadows break-through;
staining the sullen moon..
Ethereal whispers;
Rise high from the sky-mind..
Timeless paradigms redefined..
An astral body..born anew;
Redesigned of the infinite divine.
Published 6th May 2018
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7th May 2018 00:25am
"What once were wild energies;
Enveloped in wondrous reveries,
Are now cauterized gashes;
On a heart turning to ashes;
By attempts to lobotomize memories."
One doth phraseth most excellente , Good Sir !
Nice turn of the pen !
Enveloped in wondrous reveries,
Are now cauterized gashes;
On a heart turning to ashes;
By attempts to lobotomize memories."
One doth phraseth most excellente , Good Sir !
Nice turn of the pen !
7th May 2018 00:51am
That part is my favorite too. I have that one printed on a black heart picture framed in my living room.
Thanks for the read and comment.
Much appreciated.
Thanks for the read and comment.
Much appreciated.
Anonymous
7th May 2018 4:51am
I must echo Mister Blackwolf up there...those lines resonate DEEP....gotta keep this one close...for many reasons...
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
7th May 2018 11:48am
This is a small collection of short visual poems that I wrote over the course of time that I was healing from a break-up. I realized that they all equaled up to my healing process. I never intended them to flow so well together. But, yesterday, I realized how well they do.
9th Jan 2019 9:56pm
"I was but a moment of her life...
Nameless...Faceless...
But she left a permanent mark;
On my hard beating heart.
A shadow on the memory of paradise."
I really like this! Okay I like the whole poem but these lines really got me good!
Great writing CW
FC 💜
Nameless...Faceless...
But she left a permanent mark;
On my hard beating heart.
A shadow on the memory of paradise."
I really like this! Okay I like the whole poem but these lines really got me good!
Great writing CW
FC 💜
17th Jan 2019 3:29am
Very nice. Thank you. It's been a while since I've been on here. Good to see ya.
