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Trying To Luv You.....
before these tears guide me away
there are things I want you to know
before my path changes directions
and we speak no more of luv
you walk in shadows of disbelief
in deep sacred luv I’ve tried to give you
keep walking away instead of embracing me
just like you always do so selfishly
looking thru tears of my soul
thinking somehow they weren’t real
not realizing they’re from pain you’ve caused
and I knowing you don’t give a damn
I was just trying to luv ya
Inspiration ~ “Just Tryin To Love Me”
by Jason Aldean
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
there are things I want you to know
before my path changes directions
and we speak no more of luv
you walk in shadows of disbelief
in deep sacred luv I’ve tried to give you
keep walking away instead of embracing me
just like you always do so selfishly
looking thru tears of my soul
thinking somehow they weren’t real
not realizing they’re from pain you’ve caused
and I knowing you don’t give a damn
I was just trying to luv ya
Inspiration ~ “Just Tryin To Love Me”
by Jason Aldean
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 3rd May 2018
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3rd May 2018 2:46am
you’ve cause(d)
good inspiration in purple hue
coming from flower girl sis you ..
you have come back in original human facial form
as your actual avtar
good inspiration in purple hue
coming from flower girl sis you ..
you have come back in original human facial form
as your actual avtar
4th May 2018 4:07am
Hey Bro....thank you so much for the correction and encouragement......hopefully these purple hues will keep on shining......yes my avatar is me in the flesh........purple luv & hugs xo :)
3rd May 2018 7:32pm
So sad, Flower. This poem of luv and longing brings a tear but ongoing love of your style. Gentle and sweet!
4th May 2018 4:09am
Awe Crow......thank you for sharing a tear with me......the song touched me very much........such a lonely feeling came over me and I left the words flow......appreciate you always......purple luv & hugs xo :)
4th May 2018 4:32am
That final realisation of a love not requited is quite heartbreaking in your poem. Your writes are usually so optimistic but I see a different style here.
5th May 2018 2:06am
Hey Billy.......realization of one sided luv is all so clear to me right now.......that’s how it’s always been and always will be I guess........I luv souls too much.......my down fall......thank you for your thoughts.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th May 2018 2:11am
I had no idea, really. I thought until now you were feeling loving bliss, seeing that a lot of your poems talk of such amazing passion & connection.
5th May 2018 2:16am
Hey Billy.......humbled by your reply........I’m glad you’ve enjoyed other writings of mine.....deelply honored by the reads.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th May 2018 3:39am
You are always so luving and I know how it feels when you give and show your precious luv. Not everyone is worthy of it. You give luv in such a way that makes one believe in Angels. When someone is not worthy, its okay to walk away. Dont feel sad for yourself because you show and give something not many people know to give genuinely.
Love this ink mamacita
Love this ink mamacita
6th May 2018 4:30am
Hey Beautiful.......your sacred words make me smile.......I’m honored to have such encouragement from you.......you’re a soul that is easy to luv........thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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16th May 2018 1:08am
Hey ES.......there are some souls that don’t know how to luv another back......they just use them for their own gain......say words of luv when it benefits them.......thank you for sharing thoughts with me.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th May 2018 4:36am
5th Jun 2018 5:15pm
Hey Robert.......sometimes souls don’t realize when to draw the line of hurt.......thank you for your kind words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
20th Jun 2018 2:39pm
22nd Jun 2018 3:56am
Hey Robert.....thank you for being a blessing.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
