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Defective Bubble

 
The child is in the bubble
She found herself in trouble
Buried under rocket rubble

It started with a rumble
rocks fell like apple crumble
A roll and then a stumble

The child in the bubble
Struggling and seeing double
her double trouble, rubble and a cracked bubble

it's the child who made the last fumble
Was her fault she, sure couldn't grumble
about her fumble, crumble, rumble,  stumble

the child in the bubble
became the girl in trouble
a clumsy error, a bumble
died buried in the rumble crumble

in a place where rockets rock
and terrorists happily mock
there's no one to feel any shock
only an evil extremest fool
would rocket attack a kid's school
the child not as cunning as the fox
the young girl now lives in a box
Written by David_Macleod (14397816)
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