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Earth feels true, so why do i sit in a call center?
sowed seeds
tilling loamy soil for the green stalks growth
hands in the smothering dirt
i felt god under my fingernails
poisoned with freedoms
i'll pass this on to my son
tilling loamy soil for the green stalks growth
hands in the smothering dirt
i felt god under my fingernails
poisoned with freedoms
i'll pass this on to my son
Published 24th Apr 2018
Author's Note
I'm loosing myself,
so i'll build a garden.
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partially inspired by MARTÍN ESPADA
and i quote
"My reward for this life will be a thousand pounds of dirt
shoveled in my face."
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/146049/letter-to-my-father
so i'll build a garden.
---------------------------------------------------------------
partially inspired by MARTÍN ESPADA
and i quote
"My reward for this life will be a thousand pounds of dirt
shoveled in my face."
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/146049/letter-to-my-father
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24th Apr 2018 9:43pm
26th Apr 2018 5:43pm
26th Apr 2018 4:53pm
I love growing potted plants, especially camellias in my balcany. I envy you have a garden to grow stalks. I know how you feel when your fingertips go into the soil, and "i felt god under my fingernails", "poisoned with freedoms" , these lines are just awesome awesome....(echoing)
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
26th Apr 2018 5:44pm
Balcony gardens are just as good lol.
many thinks for stopping by my window today Jasmine.
many thinks for stopping by my window today Jasmine.
26th Apr 2018 5:48pm
26th Apr 2018 6:03pm
