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Verdure
You extend Your
forever hands
further into
this canyon bend;
...a murmur
sweeps walled leather - toughened
gulfs...
You mend the end
Published 22nd Apr 2018
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Awesome and inspiring.
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"Ratatouille"
This canyon bend is the length of an outstretched palms life line.
weathering ourselves among our work,
keeping busy bee for a tidy life as we're told to do.
repair cafe retreat,
we fixed into the early morning
until we lost track of the time,
turning in our hands.
beach side motel slide door window,
i'd watch that sunrise a million times
cast over the sand.
as the mini fridge compressor kicks on,
the hum reminds us of sentences spiced with existence.
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this makes me think of that time i stole the pen from the funeral home signature book.
your presence on here is greatly missed, but life beckons more than we care to give.
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"Ratatouille"
This canyon bend is the length of an outstretched palms life line.
weathering ourselves among our work,
keeping busy bee for a tidy life as we're told to do.
repair cafe retreat,
we fixed into the early morning
until we lost track of the time,
turning in our hands.
beach side motel slide door window,
i'd watch that sunrise a million times
cast over the sand.
as the mini fridge compressor kicks on,
the hum reminds us of sentences spiced with existence.
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this makes me think of that time i stole the pen from the funeral home signature book.
your presence on here is greatly missed, but life beckons more than we care to give.
22nd Apr 2018 5:28pm
Well...next time I should check your responses before I comment on your poems; I commented on yours not knowing it was in response to mine!
Thank you so much my friend :) My mind has needed a break too, and I've been reading a lot in my spare time. I do have some work backed up, but uploading and editing is a pain...
Thank you so much my friend :) My mind has needed a break too, and I've been reading a lot in my spare time. I do have some work backed up, but uploading and editing is a pain...
22nd Apr 2018 5:41pm
all good lol. a little R & R can go a long way. i've been listening to a compilation spoken word cd set i scored for $1.00 from the friends of the library used book sale.i'm engulfed in awesome dead poets words.
Ivor winters, langston hughs, ogden nash, theodore spencer, etc. it was so worth it.
Ivor winters, langston hughs, ogden nash, theodore spencer, etc. it was so worth it.
22nd Apr 2018 9:40pm
Oh my goodness, that's a treat! Yeah, you sometimes need to fill up before you pour out. That's probably more than a little cliche...I don't care lol!
23rd Apr 2018 1:40am
That is an interesting metaphor and mental image. Enjoyed this. :)
Daniel
Daniel
13th May 2018 7:27pm
Didn't quite get it but it read beautifully aloud (5 or 6 times) the words are put together so beautifully :-)))))))))))))))))))
