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Always Believe In You......Luv Me
my heart bleeds tears of memories
writing this with a drunken mind
turning back time to what used to be
always told you weren’t good enough
judged against your beautiful Sister and brainiac Brother
never for who you truly were without having faith of your future
you must overcome the thoughts of yourself
your survival depends upon what you see within
rise beyond words that once depressed your soul
once thought me to be worthless cause all said I was
till one day the smile in an old cracked mirror captivated me
that’s when I realized my soul was worth luving
how glorious of wishes could turn back time
yet my mind quivers over what I would change for your sake
nothing......cause all events of my past are who you will be
always believe in who you are no matter if others do or not
rise above hurt those you luv that causes tears deep within
turn negative to positive and prove who you truly are
(Written for the Dear me, From me comp)
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
writing this with a drunken mind
turning back time to what used to be
always told you weren’t good enough
judged against your beautiful Sister and brainiac Brother
never for who you truly were without having faith of your future
you must overcome the thoughts of yourself
your survival depends upon what you see within
rise beyond words that once depressed your soul
once thought me to be worthless cause all said I was
till one day the smile in an old cracked mirror captivated me
that’s when I realized my soul was worth luving
how glorious of wishes could turn back time
yet my mind quivers over what I would change for your sake
nothing......cause all events of my past are who you will be
always believe in who you are no matter if others do or not
rise above hurt those you luv that causes tears deep within
turn negative to positive and prove who you truly are
(Written for the Dear me, From me comp)
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 22nd Apr 2018
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22nd Apr 2018 5:45am
Lovely piece
As oft difficult, one should always have faith in one's ability to rise up & stand with everyone else as equals
As oft difficult, one should always have faith in one's ability to rise up & stand with everyone else as equals
25th Apr 2018 3:42am
Hey Rose........you’re right with your thoughts......it took me a long time to think that way.......the words still hurt......still cause me to doubt myself but I keep having faith.......thank you for gracious words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Apr 2018 7:34am
loving yourself to love others and help and grow...wonderful lines
Jeff
Jeff
25th Apr 2018 3:45am
Hey Jeff.......I turned much luv away in my life cause I thought myself unworthy.......I’m blessed with souls around me to remind me that I am.......thank you for making me smile.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Apr 2018 3:07pm
So genuine, so loving, so true, and all inspired by your love of God who loves us all where we are.
25th Apr 2018 3:47am
Hey TIG......yes He luvs us all regardless of our beginnings.......even times when we drift away from Him.......we find Him even closer to our hearts......appreciate your thoughts.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Apr 2018 7:01pm
A transcendent and uplifting write, Flower. Believing in yourself is the prime motivator and personal source of strength. Others' opinions have some consequence, but it's really yours that has the final say when it comes to Flower. I believe in you, and your writing, with luv and conviction. Excellent write!
25th Apr 2018 3:49am
Hey Crow.......your response brought a big sigh of comfort........thank you for believing in me.......I believe in you also.......your words and support always touch me......appreciate you very much.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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25th Apr 2018 3:53am
Hey ES......this struggle was real life for me.......I’m grateful for the good and bad cause it taught me how not to treat others......look at those who ar different with luv instead of judgement......for the true person comes from within the soul.......returning lots of luv & hugs your way xo :)
Wow ! Your words of wisdom from pain , and inferiority felt, not warranted I’m sure .
Help me to see my inferiority , perceived , but to look deeper within myself , and explore .
to what maybe , has been dormant , needing watering by the pale of water that you carry . . .
filled to overflowing . . . with your inner beauty showing ! . . watering others . . .
your ‘water’ sparkling . . . and glowing ! Very nice !
Help me to see my inferiority , perceived , but to look deeper within myself , and explore .
to what maybe , has been dormant , needing watering by the pale of water that you carry . . .
filled to overflowing . . . with your inner beauty showing ! . . watering others . . .
your ‘water’ sparkling . . . and glowing ! Very nice !
25th Apr 2018 3:58am
Hey Robert......I’m honored by the graceful words you left upon my ink.......what wonderful thoughts you have inspired thru your response.......thank you so much for smiling upon my page.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Apr 2018 4:39am
Thank you so much ! And you inspire me . And help me to want to write more . Thanks again !
27th Apr 2018 1:33am
Awe Robert.....wow......can’t express how you’ve made me smile deep within........the most honorable compliment in a poet or poetess life is to be an inspiration to another.......thank you so much for taking time to let me know.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
6th May 2018 00:26am
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27th Apr 2018 1:51am
Awe Sweet.......thank you for gracing my ink with your smile.......your words fill me with encouragement.......my hope with these sort of inks that others don’t feel so alone with their struggles in life.......appreciate you sharing thoughts with me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
27th Apr 2018 2:46am
So inspiring my dear Flowergirl...I feel your love and the love of God too. You have been testifying for Him with your beautiful heart. Love every word of this write.
luv & hugs xo :)
Jasmine
luv & hugs xo :)
Jasmine
27th Apr 2018 2:57am
Awe Rose.......precious words you leave upon my ink.......thank you for sharing such uplifting praise with me.......God is great.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
