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[ NaPo 2018 ] Words are never enough
to do her justice
but I'll try ...
Forever
strong, resiliant, brave;
never slave to tradition
circumstances, or trends
Who is she? depends
on who she says
she is
---not up for debate
Always
to date, unique
all on her own; critique
as much as you care
pickin at her as if you were
pulling apart a roast chicken:
wishbone, drumsticks, thighs ...
I'd rather admire her
avalanching hair
overly generous soul
or those stungunning eyes
She's artful
Honestly Crafted
from the inside out
The Genuine Article
flawless as her Poetry;
worded efficiently so---
linguistics dripping cunning
rivulets of alliteration running
as consonance dances about
and ... what assonance!
How it prances! Ohhh!
I simply can't wait
to read and appreciate
even her inner and outer-
most draftings rough
into the hours late, though
I told you so
words are never enough
previous version
In So Many Words
Forever
strong, resiliant, brave;
never slave to tradition
circumstances
or societal trends
Who is she? depends
on who she says
she is; not up for debate
Always
To date ...
Unique
All on her own
Critique all you care
in your mission;
pickin' her apart
as you would pull
chicken -
wishbone
drumsticks
thighs
Avalanching hair
Generous soul
Stunning eyes
Artful
The Genuine Article
Honestly Crafted
from the inside out
Flawless as her Poetry;
worded efficiently so
with linguistics dripping cunning
rivulets of alliteration running
as consonance dances about
And, what assonance!
How it prances!!
Ohhh!!!
Penned, roughly drafted
into the hours late
To read and appreciate
her inner workings ...
I simply can't wait!
but I'll try ...
Forever
strong, resiliant, brave;
never slave to tradition
circumstances, or trends
Who is she? depends
on who she says
she is
---not up for debate
Always
to date, unique
all on her own; critique
as much as you care
pickin at her as if you were
pulling apart a roast chicken:
wishbone, drumsticks, thighs ...
I'd rather admire her
avalanching hair
overly generous soul
or those stungunning eyes
She's artful
Honestly Crafted
from the inside out
The Genuine Article
flawless as her Poetry;
worded efficiently so---
linguistics dripping cunning
rivulets of alliteration running
as consonance dances about
and ... what assonance!
How it prances! Ohhh!
I simply can't wait
to read and appreciate
even her inner and outer-
most draftings rough
into the hours late, though
I told you so
words are never enough
previous version
In So Many Words
Forever
strong, resiliant, brave;
never slave to tradition
circumstances
or societal trends
Who is she? depends
on who she says
she is; not up for debate
Always
To date ...
Unique
All on her own
Critique all you care
in your mission;
pickin' her apart
as you would pull
chicken -
wishbone
drumsticks
thighs
Avalanching hair
Generous soul
Stunning eyes
Artful
The Genuine Article
Honestly Crafted
from the inside out
Flawless as her Poetry;
worded efficiently so
with linguistics dripping cunning
rivulets of alliteration running
as consonance dances about
And, what assonance!
How it prances!!
Ohhh!!!
Penned, roughly drafted
into the hours late
To read and appreciate
her inner workings ...
I simply can't wait!
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