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My Sweet V
Oh does he wonder about my sweet V
If he only knew the salacious pangs of hunger for just a taste of his magic
A thirst of desire so unquenchable , it's painful
A longing to take him on a mystical journey through every destination between these folds
The need of his eager fingers to burrow in this plump, taut flesh
The cravings for a dip of his tongue as I coat his inquisitive lips
A passion to cradle and worship the part of him made for my sweet V
If he only knew the salacious pangs of hunger for just a taste of his magic
A thirst of desire so unquenchable , it's painful
A longing to take him on a mystical journey through every destination between these folds
The need of his eager fingers to burrow in this plump, taut flesh
The cravings for a dip of his tongue as I coat his inquisitive lips
A passion to cradle and worship the part of him made for my sweet V
Published 16th Apr 2018
| Edited 28th Jan 2019
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Anonymous
- Edited 28th Dec 2018 6:48pm
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16th Apr 2018 6:56pm
Perfect, hopefully raises your spirits too! And you surely thought I would not commit, I am sure..
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16th Apr 2018 9:21pm
"A passion to cradle and worship the part of him made for my sweet V" - the kind of intimate cherishing some men would crave themselves.
16th Apr 2018 9:57pm
Very much so while others don't. If only all of us were so passionate in such ways!!
17th Apr 2018 2:44am
I find myself uncontrollably ravenous for a coating right about now. Not sure whether to thank you or curse you. ;) Another hot write!
17th Apr 2018 3:06am
Story of my life..near contant state of need and turned on too easily..is it a blessing or a curse , I wonder? Enjoy your stirring, you're welcome!!
17th Apr 2018 8:14am
17th Apr 2018 4:16pm
Well, that is how I like to get my mornings started! Glad to know you enjoyed it!!
19th Apr 2018 12:32pm
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19th Apr 2018 7:22pm
I loved this🌹
But you know what I loved even more??? It was your responses to reviewers!! You led them to the waters edge but did not let them drink!!!
Perfect! I smiled at your candor and laughed out loud at one response to that candor!
Made my day! You have a gift sweetie, enjoy every moment of life!
Always
Justafan of yours( for real)
~Missy~
But you know what I loved even more??? It was your responses to reviewers!! You led them to the waters edge but did not let them drink!!!
Perfect! I smiled at your candor and laughed out loud at one response to that candor!
Made my day! You have a gift sweetie, enjoy every moment of life!
Always
Justafan of yours( for real)
~Missy~
19th Apr 2018 7:34pm
Oh, thank you. These are the comments I love to see. I also love laughter and brightened days. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, but also appreciate my responses. You actually made MY day.
27th Apr 2018 8:36pm
Poetry is best served raw.....killer ink spilling,P!
Im Sea....love ur name by the way.It's enticing alone!
peace!
Im Sea....love ur name by the way.It's enticing alone!
peace!
27th Apr 2018 8:40pm
Thank you. I'm glad you found it raw, that's a good thing! I appreciate you reading and letting me know I did something right!
27th Apr 2018 8:42pm
21st Nov 2019 00:49am
Your sweet V sounds like a vacation destination of the utmost paradise. There is a playfulness here which makes me jump for joy at the prospect of what that sweet V entails.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
28th Mar 2024 7:31pm
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This poem captures intense desire and longing with vivid imagery and sensual language. The use of metaphorical exploration of intimacy adds depth to the emotional intensity portrayed. The contrast between the physical hunger and the mystical journey through desire creates a captivating narrative. Overall, it's a powerful expression of passionate longing and connection.
This poem captures intense desire and longing with vivid imagery and sensual language. The use of metaphorical exploration of intimacy adds depth to the emotional intensity portrayed. The contrast between the physical hunger and the mystical journey through desire creates a captivating narrative. Overall, it's a powerful expression of passionate longing and connection.
