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Agitated
The sound of the waves crashing is all I hear
A salty smell just hit my nose
The draft gently caressing my hair
There are no ships in sight
Why are you so agitated?
A salty smell just hit my nose
The draft gently caressing my hair
There are no ships in sight
Why are you so agitated?
Published 15th Apr 2018
| Edited 10th May 2018
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Anonymous
18th Apr 2018 11:32am
Usually has an ataractic effect... Gets one thinking.
Anonymous
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24th Apr 2018 9:28pm
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6th May 2018 9:19pm
This poem feels so calm at first... And then the question at the end brings a subtle unease... Agitation with no apparent reason, gets me wondering... Nice write :)
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5th Nov 2018 1:44pm
Sometimes when all is calm on the outside you mind is preparing for war.
Jaded🌹
Jaded🌹
20th Mar 2019 1:55pm
I've read a few of your poems now, and I find it interesting how each one is almost elusive. They all have a story to tell and that's clear. I just always find myself comparing it to my own experiences, instead of viewing it through your eyes. It is truly a skill to be able to write like you do. Great job. :)
