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Gone Trekking

Space;
merely a blank character between words.
These are the voyages of the
USS Deep Underground,
it's mission;
to explore strange new sentences
to seek out new lines
and new punctuation,
to descriptively go
where no poet has gone before.

On behalf of the United Federation of Planets
they will trek across space
visit strange new wordy worlds
meet new civilisations
such as the Kritiqueons;
a race of highly critical bards,
and fighting against the Bored;
a frightening mass of brainless trolls.

Starring Ahavati as
Captain Anatomy Loss,
JohhnyBlaze as
Commander Prompt Motif.
Also Starring
Jade Pandora as
Lieutenant Commander Tiger La Eros,
Viddax as
Lieutenant Words,
Mel44 as
Dr. Beverly Empathy,
cloventongue89
as Counsellor Inkblot,
David Macleod as
Lieutenant Commander David,
and many more as
cameos beyond this list.

They are always going forwards
because punctuation has no reverse,
it is poetry but not as we know it,
it is worse than that
it is free form poetry
without any pace
with words to kill and thrill!
Written by Viddax (Lord Viddax)
Published
Author's Note
Entry for day 13 of the NaPo competition based on the prompt of "13. USS Deep Underground : Write about an off planet adventure using DUP Poets as the crew of an intergalactic space cruiser! Go Where No Poet Has Gone Before ( or otherwise we'll just be recycling the same poetic ideas until the Universe implodes! )."
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