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Broken People
I got no freedom
when she's gone
Only pain
Every day
I got no freedom
when she's gone
Only sadness
that she's flown away
I try to keep a smile on my face
But the pain wont let me hold
my broken smile
in place
When I finally understand
that my Love
my Life
my Flag
has left these lands
I once believed
would forever
stand by me
when she's gone
Only pain
Every day
I got no freedom
when she's gone
Only sadness
that she's flown away
I try to keep a smile on my face
But the pain wont let me hold
my broken smile
in place
When I finally understand
that my Love
my Life
my Flag
has left these lands
I once believed
would forever
stand by me
Published 11th Apr 2018
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11th Apr 2018 6:42pm
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12th Apr 2018 7:49am
I thought you might have done - the echo is there in the verses - but you disguised it cleverly
11th Apr 2018 10:17pm
12th Apr 2018 6:58am
