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Brain Storm
Brain Storm
Cortical storm
Off my Azores
My frontal ship rocks
With heavy seas
Who is the captain of this boat?
He has gone down below deck
And won’t be disturbed
With his bourbon bottle at hand
All hands on deck!
The ship is capsizing.
Grab a bucket boys
Bail that water
But no volunteers
Among the merchant marines
They didn’t sign up for this
Lifeboats are filled to capacity
Cortical storm
Off my Azores
My frontal ship rocks
With heavy seas
Who is the captain of this boat?
He has gone down below deck
And won’t be disturbed
With his bourbon bottle at hand
All hands on deck!
The ship is capsizing.
Grab a bucket boys
Bail that water
But no volunteers
Among the merchant marines
They didn’t sign up for this
Lifeboats are filled to capacity
Published 9th Apr 2018
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9th Apr 2018 7:47pm
Like the flow of this one ... going back and forth with the brain and nautical themes.
I love that you understood the nautical metaphor for the brain, my friend. You made my day. ;-)
Hugs and love,
John
Hugs and love,
John
9th Apr 2018 10:43pm
Fun visions flowing in this particular ink...
a lively storm full of marine-like peeps.
Love the touch of Bourbon.
Love as always,
H
a lively storm full of marine-like peeps.
Love the touch of Bourbon.
Love as always,
H
9th Apr 2018 11:06pm
Love to you my darling friend. Yes, I was trying to make this one fun. And you have confirmed that it was. I thank you from my heart.
Love and hugs,
John
Love and hugs,
John
Anonymous
13th Apr 2018 00:47am
Yeah, a second read made me smile, almost like being sea sick, in a good way though. I'll have a shot!! lol
13th Apr 2018 1:04am
Yes, you could say this is about my natural high. lol It isn't even drug induced. :)
John
John
