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Shhh just listen to me
I enter your mind
Like a whisper
Speaking of things
Lascivious
Of temptations touch
Of things
Taboo
Sinful things
Things you yearn for so much
But
Shhh
Silence your mind
Just listen to me
To my whisper
And to the echo
Of my touch
Like a whisper
Speaking of things
Lascivious
Of temptations touch
Of things
Taboo
Sinful things
Things you yearn for so much
But
Shhh
Silence your mind
Just listen to me
To my whisper
And to the echo
Of my touch
Published 9th Apr 2018
| Edited 5th Feb 2019
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9th Apr 2018 5:05pm
“...Entered your mind like a whisper.”
What a line. I like the poem. It’s sensual but also sweet. You struck a nice balance, IMO.
Good write.
What a line. I like the poem. It’s sensual but also sweet. You struck a nice balance, IMO.
Good write.
