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Cinquain
Geometry
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Geometry
the meek
have, already,
inherited the earth;
this circle does not allow in
corners...
Written by
takis1917
Published
8th Apr 2018
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Re. Geometry
SweetOblivion
- Edited 8th Apr 2018 5:07pm
8th Apr 2018 5:06pm
Lovely form sir - should it be "for corners" rather than "in corners" or is it "allow" as in let in corners like soccer? Confuzzled.
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Re: Re. Geometry
takis1917
8th Apr 2018 5:35pm
The circle is a unity; anything pointed (say, a corner), represents a rupturing threat and is not allowed in... (Somewhat like a soccer team defending a corner kick).
Hope this helps and thankful for the comment!
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Re: Re. Geometry
SweetOblivion
8th Apr 2018 5:48pm
Thank you for helping me to understand your metaphor sir.
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Re. Geometry
crimsin
(Unveiling)
9th Apr 2018 3:33am
dearest Takis your mind bends mine
and I am transformed by your thoughts..
love Brenda
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