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what happens when you can’t live up to Mr. Kipling’s “If” list
what do you do when you can’t follow Mr. God’s commandments
how do you function when societies restrictions are too arduous
how do you cope when life sucks the spirit out of every orifice
where can you go when you need a place to hide from everyone
where do you turn when the rat race disqualifies you from the run
when will we be able to get over that wall
when will true love finally conquer all
why does life make you cry
why can’t it be simple
why?
what do you do when you can’t follow Mr. God’s commandments
how do you function when societies restrictions are too arduous
how do you cope when life sucks the spirit out of every orifice
where can you go when you need a place to hide from everyone
where do you turn when the rat race disqualifies you from the run
when will we be able to get over that wall
when will true love finally conquer all
why does life make you cry
why can’t it be simple
why?
Published 8th Apr 2018
Author's Note
What, how, where, when, why? Sorry, I don't know.
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8th Apr 2018 7:39am
I guess a simple life would be rather too much to ask.
Sucking the spirit out of every orifice made me think naughty thoughts - is that bad? Or just too complicated?
Sucking the spirit out of every orifice made me think naughty thoughts - is that bad? Or just too complicated?
Depends upon which way you want to go with it. I'm good either way. And doesn't that sound a bit kinky, but that was not my intention with the line. More of a total draining.
Posted a new poem just for you. Something simple..
Posted a new poem just for you. Something simple..
