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Fleeting Fantasy

how he craved to be
the fingernail you're chewing
when you get nervous

Written by takis1917

Published 7th Apr 2018

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Re. Fleeting Fantasy

7th Apr 2018 9:02pm

This one is ... captivating.

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Re. Fleeting Fantasy

7th Apr 2018 10:31pm

both the dangerous intimacy & then the transience of it all...a brew that's strong yet not strong enough.

excellently framed!

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Re. Fleeting Fantasy

7th Apr 2018 11:56pm

the clippings
of a mind
well in hand ..

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Re. Fleeting Fantasy

8th Apr 2018 5:51am

This is really good.

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Re. Fleeting Fantasy

8th Apr 2018 5:12pm

Once bitten, twice sly?

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8th Apr 2018 5:37pm

at this stage, always, sly...

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