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Optical Illusion
Drowning
in thoughts, does not
a deep thinker make you...
just, indicates need of swimming
lessons...
in thoughts, does not
a deep thinker make you...
just, indicates need of swimming
lessons...
Published 6th Apr 2018
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6th Apr 2018 4:31pm
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6th Apr 2018 6:26pm
good to read your series of satirical verses...within a cinquain constraint like this one or the others...
apart from the instantly sparking parody n ur wordistic artistry, the concise verses for me shines with its own light -a loaded message for those searching eyes..
write on
apart from the instantly sparking parody n ur wordistic artistry, the concise verses for me shines with its own light -a loaded message for those searching eyes..
write on
6th Apr 2018 7:20pm
Better to stand confused than to have all the answers where no questions are asked...
Thank you, generous friend!
Thank you, generous friend!
6th Apr 2018 10:28pm
Lol so true poet. I am reading The Way of the Wizard by Deepak Chopra. The wizard Merlin is imparting lessons to Arthur during the time of his child rearing. One of those is that the mortal is lost in a torrent of thoughts, attempting to label everything, the wizard simply sees and accepts things for what they are.
7th Apr 2018 4:55am
9th Apr 2018 8:49am
A collection of verses that make you smile, think and sometimes bite you on the backside. Thanks for brightening up my day.
9th Apr 2018 12:46pm
