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Flooding

(trisect)
formule poésie érotique 4/30
 
Bald Peak

That rounded peak emerge from ridgelined meet,
In shrouds, the merge and press of nature’s thrust.
How ‘spends beyond, above the valley’s seat.
 
The point as if with longer cropping truss  
 A greater height from shorter ridge append
That gains in furrowed rill with storm’s discuss
 
The graceful waves the ridges inward send
Their lines, in introspection, vale’s define
Thus soften the assail of Thor’s impend.
 
Still high above the wash, the peak’s incline,
That seems to grow in girth with forces greet,
Though quake and thunder seek its undermine.
 
 
Roots
How deep the peak roots delve in subtle twist,
Surround the river tunnel’s long pursuit,
Two mighty wings shield torrent’s gate persist.
 
In simple stream that stems from mountain’s root
That wash and drive its path to valley’s banks
How storm can rage the waters flowing chute.
 
For in oblivion’s attacking planks,
In nature’s power driven mad enrage,
In mountain core, the muscled rock hold ranks.
 
Though tremors gain, in every hold engage,
And roots may shake with every pulse insist,
Through thunders rale, the peak, the gale assuage.  
 
Deluge
Still peak exposed above to take its brunt,
As tempest rise in comings wake intent,
The mountain vale awaits its hard affront.
 
In squalls it comes, the first in waves assent,
That swells in shudders, hills enliven quick,
And soon, the waters blast in unrelent.
 
Born in electric flash and wet storm lick,
That seethe the bald peak stationed wings entreat,
Burst rushing forth as from a geysered spick’.
 
How ‘spends beyond, above the valley’s seat.
In shrouds, the merge and press of nature’s thrust
That rounded peak, emerge from ridgelined meet.
 
😇/😈
 
 
  
Written by Hepcat61 (geoff cat)
Published | Edited 5th Apr 2018
Author's Note
About the trisect form:
http://poetscollective.org/poetryforms/trisect/

So the poem is either about mountain storms... OR the external and internal clitoris and its relationship to female ejaculation...  You choose...
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