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Entre vous et moi
Between you and me —
I much prefer
A naked space between,
Don’t you?
The air to circulate
Amongst the flesh
Mon cher,
Accommodating
Everything we touch
And do.
And when it comes the
Time to close in tight,
Mon dieu,
The pleasantries
Agreeable to form
Insist.
Will it begin to
Open other space
To fill,
To languor leisurely
In damp and flow,
To slip.
And so will come
Another phase of sex
And us —
The aromatic arts
Of hidden depth
Explore,
Inhaling all the
Vapors humors draw
From one.
To stimulate the body
With liqueur
To sip,
To open spaces wide
To breathe and rest
La nuit.
Copyright©️Jade Pandora 2018. All Rights Reserved.
NaPo/GloProWriMo 2018
I much prefer
A naked space between,
Don’t you?
The air to circulate
Amongst the flesh
Mon cher,
Accommodating
Everything we touch
And do.
And when it comes the
Time to close in tight,
Mon dieu,
The pleasantries
Agreeable to form
Insist.
Will it begin to
Open other space
To fill,
To languor leisurely
In damp and flow,
To slip.
And so will come
Another phase of sex
And us —
The aromatic arts
Of hidden depth
Explore,
Inhaling all the
Vapors humors draw
From one.
To stimulate the body
With liqueur
To sip,
To open spaces wide
To breathe and rest
La nuit.
Copyright©️Jade Pandora 2018. All Rights Reserved.
NaPo/GloProWriMo 2018
Published 4th Apr 2018
| Edited 7th Dec 2018
Author's Note
Mon cher = My dear
Mon dieu = My God
La nuit = The night
• My 4th entry in this year’s NaPoWriMo.
Mon dieu = My God
La nuit = The night
• My 4th entry in this year’s NaPoWriMo.
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4th Apr 2018 1:43pm
4th Apr 2018 1:58pm
Thank you, Naajir, you’re moving to just the right tempo!
RL gratitude🙏
~Jade🐅
RL gratitude🙏
~Jade🐅
4th Apr 2018 2:17pm
Love the pasionate flow of your poetic voice here ; coupled with the French vocab makes it even more romantic .
Incroyable ! :)
- El
Incroyable ! :)
- El
Cher El, j'aime pimenter les choses et toujours le goût est subtile. Je vous remercie
(Dear El, i love to spice things up and still the taste is subtle. Thank you.)
(Dear El, i love to spice things up and still the taste is subtle. Thank you.)
4th Apr 2018 3:59pm
4th Apr 2018 4:36pm
6th Apr 2018 11:27am
6th Apr 2018 1:37pm
7th Apr 2018 2:08am
C'est une poeme magnifique! Marvelous wording and, particularly, structure. May la nuit never end...
9th Apr 2018 1:30am
9th Apr 2018 6:39pm
Un plaisir de vous rencontrer, Andy. Je m'appelle Jade.
*un baiser sur les deux joues comme c'est la coutume continentale*
(a kiss on both cheeks as is the continental custom)
*un baiser sur les deux joues comme c'est la coutume continentale*
(a kiss on both cheeks as is the continental custom)
9th Apr 2018 1:32am
