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My love for you
I look into your eyes
I can see the gift of life
You are my tree of life
My meteorite in the sky
Tell me if I've said to much
Your eyes burn bright like the stars in the night sky causing a meteor to fly by
The amazing beauty of galaxies sparkles in your eyes
Your hearts as big as Jupiter the largest planet in the sky
Your voice is like whispers from meteorites floating by
The Sun's rays magnificent glory compares your bod
The love I have for you is as beautiful as the northern lights
Seen from outer space
I have said to much
But I will tell you
Your soul struck my heart
like the moon's first human touch
Never will if fade always will it stay
You are my Armstrong
my sonic boom,
You are my personal moon
By Sara Craig
March 24 2018
Published 27th Mar 2018
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27th Mar 2018 9:06am
i love this ! i love the ending here
Your soul struck my heart
like the moon's first human touch
Never will if fade always will it stay
You are my Armstrong
my sonic boom,
You are my personal moon
sonic boom , personal moon... i love how this sounds.
i love how you bring reference to the planets, space and the northern lights.
Your soul struck my heart
like the moon's first human touch
Never will if fade always will it stay
You are my Armstrong
my sonic boom,
You are my personal moon
sonic boom , personal moon... i love how this sounds.
i love how you bring reference to the planets, space and the northern lights.
29th Mar 2018 9:18am
Some good lines here Saralynn, however, with a bit of tidying, it could be even better!
