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When I'm Gone

here today
gone tomorrow
losing faith
absent hope
perpetual
this state
dying slowly
without love

reluctant
soul
falling
fast

will you
miss me
when
I’m gone

angry eyes
locked out
bodies limp
hitting ground
wounded art
no cadence
force fed
on guilt

reluctant
soul
falling
fast

will you
miss me
when
I’m gone

stepping
up hard
no backing
down
cut me
open
dissect
the wisdom

whispers
taunt
random
situations
electric
overload
killing
machines

reluctant
soul
falling
fast

will you
miss me
when
I’m gone





Written by diamonddave75
Published
Author's Note
Long time since i attempted lyrics.. i'm not christian.. yet i have faith.. in something not revealed yet.. please send positive energy my way.. much appreciated..
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