SENRYU-UNEMPLOYED

Indeed from experience it's horrid
Another one is awaiting your application soon enough  I'm sure xD

I certainly hope you're right. It's not my first rodeo either...things always work for the best. Maybe it's time to just be a full-time poet.
Cheers!

Great form - apt meaning as ever

Thank you, Sweet!  It's the perfect form for the conveyance of feeling when too distraught for  words. Cheers!

A powerful three lines.  There isn't much more heartbreaking than getting sacked.  A remarkably concise look at that pain.  And I love how you handle the senryu form.  Nobody does it better....

Thank you Sir Crow. It's the anxiety that hurts most. I've been given a nice bit of buffer...I will chill for a couple of days. Write some poetry. Thank you for the read and your friendship.
Cheers!

I feel sorry to hear that dear Gahddess. I know what you are feeling. Just hope you can find a better one soon.
As for the the poem itself, senryu is new for me, but I can tell how tactful you handle it.
A really nice write to show your anxiety and depression.

much love
RoseJasmine

Thank you RoseJasmine. I am confident I will find something better as well.

A senryu is essentially a haiku but the topic is about people and life rather than nature. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement. <3

Cheers!

Thank you for telling me about the style of a senryu. I should try to write it.
I know how nice and patient you are. A lot of work needs this kind of person like you.

I wish I could just concentrate on writing. I like the Senryu/Haiku style because it delivers a, sometimes powerful, message using `very few words. Every word counts. I like your new profile pic...you have a wonderful smile.

This gave me chills ... I lost my job when a yoga studio I was working at closed ... took me a little while to find another job ... cyberhug GW

Thank you Dragonfly! I think I had burnt out awhile ago so I'm excited to embark on a new adventure.

Part of my cosmic philosophy is that everything happens for a reason ... even if we don't at first, or ever come to understand it.

Sound wisdom!

precise .. sad..
and yet bearing the seeds of a new beginning !
best wishes and good luck :)

Thank-you to-be-me! I have quite a few folks in my corner...I am happy for your words of encouragement.

talent is never left unrevealed:) employed or otherwise !
you can and you shall :)

Now that thou hast commanded me to succeed I'll will do so willingly :)

amen :)