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playful lust

a girl and a boy
in a bedroom, underwater
the water is lingering
around their heavily aching skin
only for each other, do they crave to touch
swim closer and closer
the cold undercurrents of the ocean
change in temperature
as the heat of two bodies
dramatically takes a rapid rise
the burning sun takes over
surrounding water bubbling and bubbling
a warm jacuzzi now sits
listening to the lust of two wanting souls
taking on their aching want
they move closer and closer
their hand's touch
bubbles are rapidly leaping
they are listening, responding
to the desires in the sea
their lips touch, hands are intertwined
sea simply falling away
they are in a bedroom encased in lust
the walls have disappeared
the ceiling of no importance
everything has faded away
fish swim by, some even touch
their naked and exposed skin
with their fins, accidentally of course
but the lovers fail to notice
so engaged in a creamy like kiss
attentive to the feel of soft and friendly lips
they forget their surroundings, the bedroom
the container, even the bed loses its touch
kissing and rolling around on weightless air
rising, funny bubbles
carried away amongst the sheets
of weightless air
everything else has fallen by the wayside
nothing else matters
when it comes to the meeting
of a lustful girl and a lustful boy



Written by Daffodil32
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Author's Note
i just wanted to try writing an erotic poem , im not even sure if this would be classed as erotic or even if its any good.. but i tried
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