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Seasons
Floating
in and out
with the seasons
aimless wonders
wander
reality or insanity
sprigs open
searching for a reason
floating
in and out
with the seasons
just a beginning
or have we
reached an end
in and out
with the seasons
aimless wonders
wander
reality or insanity
sprigs open
searching for a reason
floating
in and out
with the seasons
just a beginning
or have we
reached an end
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- Edited 26th May 2018 6:48pm
21st Mar 2018 9:02pm
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Re. Seasons
21st Mar 2018 10:22pm
dearest Tim I hate endings so my hopes
it's just a beginning..
though endings can be poignantly beautiful too..
this one made me think..
excellent..
love Brenda
it's just a beginning..
though endings can be poignantly beautiful too..
this one made me think..
excellent..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Seasons
21st Mar 2018 10:48pm
Re. Seasons
21st Mar 2018 11:43pm
Interesting question, Tim. Many view spring as a beginning; however, it, too, is also an end.
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Re. Seasons
22nd Mar 2018 11:51am
Re. Seasons
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2018 4:42pm
Every ending is another beginning. Lovely piece, Tim, truly
...Willow
...Willow
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Re. Seasons
6th Apr 2018 10:36am
nicely woven from the beginning to end...
and yet the interlude so full exists :)
and yet the interlude so full exists :)
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