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Dad's Wedding Ring
Family vacation
Parents both deceased
Retrieved my dad's wedding ring
It lay resting in a safe deposit box
Almost 20 years now
I feel him in this ring
Brings comfort
I was never one for wearing gold
I'll make this exception
It worn in places
He wore it for over 50 years
I should be so lucky
Parents both deceased
Retrieved my dad's wedding ring
It lay resting in a safe deposit box
Almost 20 years now
I feel him in this ring
Brings comfort
I was never one for wearing gold
I'll make this exception
It worn in places
He wore it for over 50 years
I should be so lucky
Published 20th Mar 2018
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Anonymous
20th Mar 2018 10:11pm
*sigh*
and, Cowboy
I`m sure your pops
would be so proud ...
20th Mar 2018 10:51pm
21st Mar 2018 10:50pm
dearest Poet I understand this is deeply treasured
it is a beautiful piece of your parents
and represents the years they spent together..
In this write I can feel your dad smiling at you
knowing you are loving mate and son..
love you..
Brenda
it is a beautiful piece of your parents
and represents the years they spent together..
In this write I can feel your dad smiling at you
knowing you are loving mate and son..
love you..
Brenda
22nd Mar 2018 2:57am
Appreciate your words Brenda
It's the least I can do to carry on the tradition of a great man ....
Xx
It's the least I can do to carry on the tradition of a great man ....
Xx
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2018 4:12pm
Taking solace in something tangible when his absence is felt. I get this. Deeply. I wore my dad's sweater for years. Sending hugs your way
...Willow
...Willow
23rd Mar 2018 1:33am
25th Mar 2018 9:05pm
such a beautiful tribute poem for your Dad I am jealous much :-((
Huge Like :-)))))))))
Huge Like :-)))))))))
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