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Fifty Shades of Camo (formerly: When He Comes Home)

Fifty Shades of Camo    
       
Gone a week.      
Army work.      
The phone rings.      
Did you miss me?      
“I missed you.”      
I wanted you.      
I needed you.      
     
“I'll be home soon,”      
you say.      
       
You enter through the door,      
clad in camo, head to toe.      
You grab my wrists,      
pin me against the wall,      
Your lips crush mine.      
You want,      
you need      
me too.      
       
Pulling off my shirt      
as we head up the stairs.      
Your army jacket,      
My red, silk blouse,      
Your green army undershirt,      
My black, lacy bra.      
A littered trail upon the steps,      
Clothing breadcrumbs to the bedroom.      
       
Your heel kicks the door        
It slams shut      
As you move me toward the bed      
       
“You are mine,”        
your voice husky,      
as you toss me onto the duvet.      
       
Clutched within your tenacious grip      
Pinned beneath your unwavering stare      
Your legs straddling my hips      
Your hands grabbing my hair.      
Your teeth graze my stiff nipple      
I feel something at my core.      
You nip the soft skin of my abdomen      
I can't breathe, I want more.      
       
You pull my hair to let me know      
That tonight you're in charge      
You grind against me through our pants      
To let me know you're hard.      
       
A passionate kiss      
Our tongues dance      
Your hands find my wrists      
and hold them tight      
Imprisoned in your grasp      
My body doesn't stand a chance      
       
Softly bucking under you      
My body knows the motions      
But you pull away and lock me with      
Your steely blue-eyed stare      
Because tonight you're the master,      
And you'll take no cues from me.      
       
I still my aching, yearning thrust.      
I close my eyes,      
Try not to think      
My mouth wants to take you in.      
Instead, you keep grinding, teasing me      
When I just want to feel your skin.      
And I imagine that even through the clothes        
you feel how incredibly wet I am.      
       
My wrists are freed        
You sit up on your knees      
Straddling me      
And remove your belt.      
Here it comes      
I think to myself.      
I know your smooth, muscled skin beneath      
I know your manhood when its unsheathed      
I'm breathless with anticipation      
Waiting for your pants to hit the floor      
First your belt and then...      
You stop.      
Don't stop!      
You pull the belt taut between your hands.      
As I watch      
A grin spreads 'cross your face,      
That penetrating gaze,      
You wrap the nylon belt around my wrists      
“Stay put,” you demand      
Yes sir,      
Your wish is my command.      
Your camo pants thrown on the chair      
My eyes go wide        
when I see      
you're completely bare!      
All day long on army duty      
You were without underwear.      
Going commando,        
dick loose in your camo,      
Oh my God, that's hot!      
I must have moaned out loud      
because you smile and say      
“Not yet.”      
       
You pull my pants down to my ankles      
Chills run down my spine      
You yank my fastened arms above my head      
“Like I said,      
you're mine.”      
You claim my mouth with your sensuous lips      
I moan into the kiss      
       
Your run your penis across my chest;        
You're the artist, I'm the canvas.      
You're painting a picture across my breasts.      
A watercolor between the peaks.      
I see the glisten at your tip      
A pearly drop      
Of liquid love.      
My tongue      
moves across my lips.      
It must be there      
in my longing stare,      
My lust, my need,      
My sinful desire to taste your seed.      
“Someone needs        
a punishing.”      
       
Suddenly flipped over onto my front      
A ragdoll in your meaty grip,      
Your toy to play with as you wish      
But I playfully struggle and fight back      
You respond with a hearty slap.      
My rump stung      
I am stunned      
You've never done that before.      
       
Face nestled in the pillow      
I can't see      
But I hear      
Your footprints cross the floor.      
       
A drawer opens      
I hear you search      
Through cloth and metal things.      
       
The drawer slams shut      
I jump      
“You startled me!”      
No response      
But I felt      
A depression in the bed      
near where I lay.      
I turn my head      
to see.      
But black as night,      
Satin fabric,      
You swiftly blindfold me.      
       
“Open up” I hear you say      
Finally, at last      
Awaiting your sweet cock, I obey;      
You put the ball in fast.      
       
Gagged and bound,      
My fantasy,      
My longing, my desire.      
Yet I burn for you,        
Want you deep inside.      
My body is on fire.      
I make a noise      
to protest      
your neglect      
of my need.      
You chuckle.      
A slap across my ass,      
A little gentler than before.      
“Come here, you filthy, whore.”      
Firmly grasping both my cheeks      
You spread me open wide      
I gasp, at the cold air      
suddenly on my exposed backside.      
       
Something cool and wet,      
something hard and rubber      
Pressed against my bum      
Then a click....then one more      
And I hear a soft, vibrating hum.      
       
I take a deep breath,      
I know this part,      
I have only a moment to prepare      
Pushing out, trying to relax      
You stick the toy inside my ass.      
Ung! Comes out around the gag in my mouth,      
My entire body so aroused      
I feel the pulsing through my nipples,      
Pressing hard against the sheets.      
Feel every nerve ending in my ass      
As you push my BoB in me.      
Your fingers play lightly on my back,      
A little flicker on my clit      
The sensuality, the burnining sensation,      
my entire body is lit.      
Intensity      
Spilling over me      
Over      
And over      
I'm losing all control.      
That plane of pleasure      
That bright white pool of bliss      
And through it all, I hear you, dimly.      
“Are you ready for this?”      
       
Flipped over, still impaled,      
You remove my gag.      
Featherlike, your thumb caresses my lips      
You lean over and whisper      
“Lick it, bitch.”      
 
I sit up as best I can      
With the dildo still in me.       
My jaw is sore but I don't care      
my mouth is willing and ready.      
I breath you in      
Your smell      
So intoxicating, so heady.           
My tongue caresses you,      
Your silky, rock-hard dick.      
Deeply veined,      
Throbbing,      
Thick.      
       
Losing myself in the moment,        
I take you in my mouth.      
You grab my hair and yank      
Your slickened dick pops out.      
“Not. Yet.”      
       
I whimper.      
You know I want you so much      
You push me back down      
and tease me with your touch.      
Your fingers play my body      
Like I'm your instrument      
Music humming        
through my veins      
I'm coming undone      
Unchained      
Melody      
My body      
Fiercly arching up toward you      
“Almost,”      
You say      
As your fingers play      
With my pussy lips.      
You gently glide your finger      
Right across my slit.      
Parting me,      
clit revealed      
Shivering as I feel      
Your cool breath blow against my sex,      
And I hope your tongue is next.      
But first your finger penetrates      
My slick, inner, private place.      
Your thumb continues on my clit,      
Once again I hear the clicks.      
Just a bit, just to tease.      
I whisper, beg you,      
“Please!”      
       
“Get it wet,” you say to me      
As the toy's still vibrating.      
I blindly suck your cock,      
Slicking it up for you.      
My pleasure building to a crescendo,      
Trying to hold on, though,      
Slurping your hard-on      
I'm losing the battle,      
feel it coming on      
As you pull yourself from my lips      
...click, click...      
You shove yourself deep in my pussy,      
I'm double-penetrated,      
Filled to the max,      
On the verge of breaking in two,      
About to climax      
And I know you can feel it too      
The dildo rubbing against you      
inside of me      
deliciously.      
I feel the rising 'O',      
You're thrusting hard      
I hear you moan      
And I lose myself.      
Exquisite pleasure      
Liquid fire.      
Crystal sparks exploding in my mind.      
As I cum hard      
You aren't far behind.      
One more thrust, deep and raw      
You cry out wildly      
As you cum        
Savagely      
You penetrate my sanity      
Lost together, you and I      
flying high        
Somewhere in a limitless,      
sensuous, unconscious bliss.
Written by DragonInTheSky
Published | Edited 2nd Oct 2020
Author's Note
This poem is me trying my hand at longer, more 'in-depth' erotic poetry. A little less on the plot, a little longer on the sex. Might be just long enough for those of you at home playing solo      
...or maybe you're reading together for a little 'mood' lifter with that special someone. Either way...      
I hope you enjoyed. ;)      
I would like ***any and all feedback you can give*** but, in particular, I would like to know what you thought of the last several lines. Did they work? Too weak? What did you like about the poem? What didn't you like? Do you want to see more long, sex poems like this? Let me know below.
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