A Reminder

wonderful sense of motion...well done H

Thank you very much Lawrence! :)
I appreciate your time in my work
and feeling the motion of my works..



Love
H

"Sun's blinding, but cannot blink  
When enticed by nature's grooves"

what a happy place to be... thanks for the poetic walk
It made my afternoon get smoother and more sunny
and I took a walk

love  
Jeff

Glad to have made your day smoother Jeff!
:)
The ocean sure is a wonderful place to jam out on
I am only blessed by nature's beauty...


Love
H

This is a beautiful piece and took me to a calm/mellow/happy place.

I am honored by your lovely praise!
Thank you!
Glad to have taken you to a happy place
the art and beauty of nature should all be shared...


H

'I've forgotten these wondrous  wonders
Of life, from all the days

Burrowed inside shadows " reminds me I should embrace the more quiet beauty of nature in life more. Outstanding musings my dearest lady. :)

Thank you very much dear poetikmindedness... :)
May the beauty of nature bring you  wonderful light as well...


Love
H

Another serene write H . Beautiful from from beginning to end . Positives vibes indeed :)

Thank you so much E! :)
Yes, positive vibes are the best vibes...

I am only blessed by the wonderful nature to have brought me such peace...


Love
H

Beautiful eloquence and grace in this poem, thank you for carrying me to the sea on the waves of your melodious words 😊💕

Oh, thank you for your wonderful feedback! :)  
I am glad to have brought you with me in this wonderful trip to the sea....  
   
much appreciations & love,  
H

Your oceanic vision washes over me like a  salty wave on a summer's day in Maine. There is a far eastern beauty which sings to me through your words. The salty air and melodious song of waves rolling in bring joy to this landlocked lad. You have a magic pen which scribes nature into songs of life and love. ;-)

Hugs,
John

And your wonderful words of love has brought waves of joy!
I'm very glad that you see such beauty in my works...
May the salted seas bring you everlasting sweetness
to the mind and eye who sees & possess such! :)

Your pen must be enchanted as well for it scribes wondrous things.

Love & hugs
H

our cracks are where the light gets in

and may that light spread all throughout...


Love & appreciations
H

It is beautiful dear. Never lose that

Thank you..! :)
You write beautifully as well
and very romantic love..



I greatly appreciate your visit!
Love,
H

It's a lovely write, your placement of  rhyme is harmonious. Change wondrous wonders. I rarely edit my works much, but word doubling is one thing I do watch for.

There is a Zen quality to your humble reverie that is refreshing as the breezes and the rushing and retreating blue hills of the sea,  so you capture the spirit well. Enjoyed this.

Daniel

Thank you for your insightful,
amazing feedback! :)

Your words are wonderful....

But I felt those two paired well together because they sound alike..
different meaning, but similar sound
to show contrast between them...

is it actually a bad thing?
I was curious because I thought it as a form of alliteration...
Although I do tend to struggle with English grammar....

Respects
H

No it's not bad, it's just a personal preference of mine to avoid, but when you consider the differentiation of definition, it can work.

I'm glad the feedback was useful to you. :)

Thank you! :)

The oceans certainly are a powerful and mysterious force. Your poem greatly captures their majesty and beauty.

Well done!

Thank you very much! :)


Yes, what a powerful force the oceans are....



your wonderful words are a delight!

Appreciations,
H

This is nice. The rhyming of the words, I really like that in a poem.
I think it makes it more colorful or something like that.  Good job.

Thank you Hallucinostic! :)

Very grateful of those words...

The rhyming is the hardest for me lol





Love,
H

Oh Little One, you capture the magic of the sea ... I am so, so ready for seeing it ... soon! Thanks for getting me in the right reverent mood

Thank you big sis! :)



Yes the sea is quite very magical....
I tried to capture the essence of it as best as I could..

But there's nothing better than actually seeing it ourselves lol


Hope you enjoy the beginning of April...


Love
H

My favourite place to be and you have captured the magnetism of it and all its beauty perfectly.
Perfect H <3

You enrich me with wonderful words...
thank you !


Love
H