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I surround myself with sinners and it seems to suit just fine
Driving i look to the mangled
misshapen pine tree demolition lines off on the mountains distance
over soccer fields filled with scores of young yearning athletes
daydreaming dandelion money fields of their parents
uniform condominium correspondence
through sought after letter carrier jobs
off no outside shoe clean beige carpets
spiders in the garden speaking of those goddamned water spout drains
that foiled their plans yet again
immortalized in song
contemplating the thoughts of mad men
rationalizing the "i think therefore i am" theory
and just how many 45 MPH poems it will take to prove
brains are the bringers of the newsflash
backlash
gave my 3rd grade
25 cent prize
claw vending machine heart to a girl
i've been slowly dying inside ever since
salmonella smile
full size Chevrolet trucks beat my head in with a baseball bat
i can park on your houses roof just fine
Evil and Robbie Knievel caught my eye growing up
misshapen pine tree demolition lines off on the mountains distance
over soccer fields filled with scores of young yearning athletes
daydreaming dandelion money fields of their parents
uniform condominium correspondence
through sought after letter carrier jobs
off no outside shoe clean beige carpets
spiders in the garden speaking of those goddamned water spout drains
that foiled their plans yet again
immortalized in song
contemplating the thoughts of mad men
rationalizing the "i think therefore i am" theory
and just how many 45 MPH poems it will take to prove
brains are the bringers of the newsflash
backlash
gave my 3rd grade
25 cent prize
claw vending machine heart to a girl
i've been slowly dying inside ever since
salmonella smile
full size Chevrolet trucks beat my head in with a baseball bat
i can park on your houses roof just fine
Evil and Robbie Knievel caught my eye growing up
Published 16th Mar 2018
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16th Mar 2018 1:22pm
dearest Samael darkest genius
so many images woven together
telling a story..
brilliant..
love Crim
so many images woven together
telling a story..
brilliant..
love Crim
16th Mar 2018 7:06pm
your delivery captures how you captivatingly say rather that what you say so in brilliance n in a unique rush that keeps reader much engaged..
the talking contemplating verses n the way they structure themselves freely, n ofcourse the word choices keep me to come again n again on reads.. thanks for this. hope to read you more.
esp. (had always) loved the way the (such) title runs n conveys a poetry in itself....n how you put in here with such (unthought) effectual combos ,
"i've been slowly dying inside ever since
salmonella smile
full size Chevrolet trucks beat my head in with a baseball bat" ...liked the intensity you bring in by this..
thanks agn for the read
the talking contemplating verses n the way they structure themselves freely, n ofcourse the word choices keep me to come again n again on reads.. thanks for this. hope to read you more.
esp. (had always) loved the way the (such) title runs n conveys a poetry in itself....n how you put in here with such (unthought) effectual combos ,
"i've been slowly dying inside ever since
salmonella smile
full size Chevrolet trucks beat my head in with a baseball bat" ...liked the intensity you bring in by this..
thanks agn for the read
