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Majesty Inside The Darkness
I've been so far out of touch
the beauty in me hidden
within hiccups of thought
daffo-deals are made for my soul
god I'm saddened
the sun my halo
greedy fingers in my pie
out of control flippancy
seeking the majesty of the place
dark riders trailing through Yosemite
staining my thoughts with decapitated ladies
will it be just us or will there be JUSTICE?
this isn't what I thought it was
dark stars work hard
I see their crazed hunger
hybrids breed their insanity
calm is the day
autumn leaves change
the red, yellows and oranges lend peace
reminds me of your nursery
where there was just me and you
dandelion wishes carried away on a breeze
land at your feet
do as you desire
I'm awaiting your presence
wait to see where today takes me
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Re. Majesty Inside The Darkness
Anonymous
14th Mar 2018 4:45pm
The near forgotten yesterday's amongst the optimist striving to maintain is rich in this. Textured yet weathered its a beautiful write. Sin
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16th Mar 2018 2:42am
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14th Mar 2018 6:44pm
great to read something less turbulent and angry, Brenda....imaginative, beautiful imagery and an overall positive vision...great read...
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16th Mar 2018 2:42am
Re. Majesty Inside The Darkness
14th Mar 2018 11:00pm
Brenda.. simply fucking brilliant.. love this, and you my sister..
Dave
Dave
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16th Mar 2018 2:43am
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14th Mar 2018 11:04pm
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Re. Majesty Inside The Darkness
Anonymous
15th Mar 2018 1:36pm
The beauty in you can never truly be hidden, lovely Dark Angel. It is a living, breathing thing and walks all around you...a glowing aura. Waiting can be so hard. Sending you love and many many hugs, beautiful one. I love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. Majesty Inside The Darkness
16th Mar 2018 2:44am
thank you beautiful Willow for showing me so much love forgive my detachment lately I will be back to being me soon :)
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda
Re. Majesty Inside The Darkness
15th Mar 2018 7:01pm
I'd say this poem contains majesty. It begins quite darkly but there's a note of hope at the end, and I hope the dandelion wishes come true. And I love the nursery and Yosemite details, which make it seem more personal. Fine work in any case.
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Re. Majesty Inside The Darkness
16th Mar 2018 6:53pm
there must be breath for words to full take flight
love inhaling
Jeff
love inhaling
Jeff
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Re. Majesty Inside The Darkness
17th Mar 2018 3:58am
Re. Majesty Inside The Darkness
18th Mar 2018 3:04am
Through disbursement the blowing dandelion seed brings the hope of new growth.
So aware of your feelings you are Crim,
a blessing for those with whom you share.
Sandman
So aware of your feelings you are Crim,
a blessing for those with whom you share.
Sandman
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Re. Majesty Inside The Darkness
19th Mar 2018 1:28pm
I Love this Crim... what an amazingly introspective... almost acid like dream like vision!!
I Love this Crim!!
Fire
XOXO
I Love this Crim!!
Fire
XOXO
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Re. Majesty Inside The Darkness
25th Mar 2018 6:59pm
this poem is showing your smooth side the poem glides as does your rendition :-)))))
fantastic :-)) Huge Hugs :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))
fantastic :-)) Huge Hugs :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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