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In Love Haikus 7.0
(i) Flower
a rose petal falls
loves me, loves me not
love simply arose
(ii) Hard Fruit
she's a bit fruity
she is the apple of my eye
my pants banana
(iii) Sexy Hug
if she was a tree
I'd become a tree hugger
hugging her hippies
(iv) Salad No Dressing
she'd never be cold
I'd be a sexy snow man
she'd get my carrot
(v) No Nut Allergy
cold snap secret stash
I am a cute red squirrel
I'd show her my nuts
(vi) Red
Lips like strawberry
they are red, sweet and kissable
love her berry much
(vii) Tits and Ass
I love her melons
pert squeezable and cherry pipped
her ass like a peach
Written by
David_Macleod
(14397816)
Published 11th Mar 2018
| Edited 28th Dec 2018
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Re. In Love Haikus 7.0 - dedicated to Nighbirdblue
Anonymous
11th Mar 2018 3:51am
Awe David...... beautiful dedication to your luv.........she’s a wonderful inspiration to you........congrats to you both.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. In Love Haikus 7.0 - dedicated to Nighbirdblue
11th Mar 2018 3:56am
she has become my world - who'd have thought it :-)))))
thank you for your support :-)))))
thank you for your support :-)))))
Re: Re. In Love Haikus 7.0 - dedicated to Nighbirdblue
Anonymous
11th Mar 2018 4:02am
And I’m sure you have become Hers.........thank you for sharing your inspiration and letting have a peak of your special luv......purple luv & hugs to you both xo :)
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Re. In Love Haikus 7.0 - dedicated to Nighbirdblue
Anonymous
11th Mar 2018 5:46am
I always get the biggest smile on my face when I read these love poems for your lovely nightbird. So so happy for you both.
Big group hugs :-)
...Willow
Big group hugs :-)
...Willow
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Re: Re. In Love Haikus 7.0 - dedicated to Nighbirdblue
16th Mar 2018 1:21am
thank you so much Willow :-))))) You have always been supportive, loving and caring - I am sure you mean a great deal to both of us :-)))))))
Huge Big Warm Hugs
Huge Big Warm Hugs
Re. In Love Haikus 7.0 - dedicated to Nighbirdblue
11th Mar 2018 7:43am
Re: Re. In Love Haikus 7.0 - dedicated to Nighbirdblue
16th Mar 2018 1:22am
Re. In Love Haikus 7.0 - dedicated to Nighbirdblue
11th Mar 2018 12:29pm
Love is never covert but open and honest as this write. I love it and you two. 💕
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Re: Re. In Love Haikus 7.0 - dedicated to Nighbirdblue
16th Mar 2018 1:24am
thank you so much that comment meant so much to us You are both inspirational as is your love <3
Thank you my friend <3
Thank you my friend <3
Re. In Love Haikus 7.0 - dedicated to Nighbirdblue
11th Mar 2018 3:13pm
Your love is amazingly beautiful. It's melting everybody's heart. Love your boldness and honesty.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. In Love Haikus 7.0 - dedicated to Nighbirdblue
16th Mar 2018 1:25am
truth and real love has no shame :-))))))))
thank you so much for your kindness :-)))))
thank you so much for your kindness :-)))))
Re. In Love Haikus 7.0 - dedicated to Nighbirdblue
15th Mar 2018 9:56am
This is so lighthearted it makes me giggle and sing! =) Just what I needed this morning, you make me feel so special hunny!
The good sighs ❤️ So much love and hippie hugs!
The good sighs ❤️ So much love and hippie hugs!
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Re: Re. In Love Haikus 7.0 - dedicated to Nighbirdblue
16th Mar 2018 1:26am
feeling special comes from actually being special and you are <3 :-))))))))))
thank you angel - lots of love and hugs <3 :-)))))))
thank you angel - lots of love and hugs <3 :-)))))))