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i suggest you run

i suggest you run    
   
run for the hills    
 of your wild life    
driven in you    
   
 run    
   
until it takes all your breaths away    
   
run    
   
 until your heart screams out of your chest    
 until your legs can  barely hold the weight of your aspirations..    
   
i suggest you run,    
 run till you trip    
and if you fall,    
scramble to get back to  stance,    
i    
 suggest    
 you    
 run    
   
until every ounce of you is leaked from your body    
 every memory of your past is driven from your sweat    
   
 i suggest you run,    
until your feet bleed    
until you cannot see    
   
 i    
suggest    
 you    
run..      
   
towards the light..    
run for your life .    
   
i suggest you run,      
with the fire singing in your heart    
run for yourself    
 run for love    
   
so go on    
move on    
and    
run
Written by mariellewrites
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Author's Note
edited a poem from six years ago. I haven't written anything new in a month so I edited this today, any feedback is appreciated

inspired by myself believing there was an angelic being whispering to me in a time of my life to move on , and run towards something new
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