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Out-of-Body Fun

in a bamboo forest
on an island in the sea
far away from anyone
it's just you and me

and the insects buzzing
and birds whose flapping wings
merge with the rustle of the leaves
and other sounds of things

we have just arrived
climbing the very steep
mountain trail from far below
maybe we're asleep

dreaming we're together
dreaming we've both come
from different places far away
out-of-body fun

you are stimulating
we both seem so real
this is more than ordinary
I know how you feel

in a bamboo forest
on an island in the sea
far away from anyone
when just you and me
bcpoet
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