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Complexities & Hesitancies
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I'd go,
pack for happiness &
go to you, if asked;
It's what I'd do, will do,
This acceptable answer,
unquestionably warm
within my thoughts
Complexities &
hesitancies, movements of
measured timescales
where there be sound
waiting to welcome anew
Somethings are just as
they will be
And my packing for
happiness still fits well
when waiting to be with you
I'd go,
pack for happiness &
go to you, if asked;
It's what I'd do, will do,
This acceptable answer,
unquestionably warm
within my thoughts
Complexities &
hesitancies, movements of
measured timescales
where there be sound
waiting to welcome anew
Somethings are just as
they will be
And my packing for
happiness still fits well
when waiting to be with you
Published 2nd Mar 2018
Author's Note
Love moves mountains
It's simply as it is
It's simply as it is
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2nd Mar 2018 4:16pm
Beautiful & mysteriously complex,
But one I'm collecting experiences from
to learn more of its ways to happiness
But one I'm collecting experiences from
to learn more of its ways to happiness
2nd Mar 2018 4:24pm
2nd Mar 2018 4:30pm
2nd Mar 2018 5:21pm
Rose,
This is a very romantic stanza:
"And my packing for
happiness still fits well
when waiting to be with you"
Brava!
This is a very romantic stanza:
"And my packing for
happiness still fits well
when waiting to be with you"
Brava!
2nd Mar 2018 6:17pm
It's not always a bed of roses when you hit those thorns; however, it's nonetheless beautiful. Even moreso when you feel the softness and inhale the aroma. 🌹
2nd Mar 2018 10:17pm
Love and it's many layers
Dig deep & find it to be less thorny
Certainly not to be painful
Dig deep & find it to be less thorny
Certainly not to be painful
Anonymous
6th Mar 2018 3:46pm
Through all it's complications, love really can be a beautiful thing huh.
6th Mar 2018 5:27pm
Real love isn't so much flyby
More here for the long haul when you have it
Always learning from its beautiful ways
Never taking it for granted
No easy route
More here for the long haul when you have it
Always learning from its beautiful ways
Never taking it for granted
No easy route
