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Giving Way
My feet give way and, with a cry, I fall
To kneel in his shadow; effervescence
Is pushed away - If I feel really small,
Then it is due to his extensive presence:
As I absorb his member on a terrace,
Covered with crocuses from end to end,
Their beauty envelopes me, like the menace
I've packaged in my mouth, where I befriend
His cock head and the shaft, as he desires;
I suck; this tasting obviates my lot;
Watching his eyes, intent, as he admires
His movement in my throat: I'll squeeze a drop
That will become a rivulet - a flood:
As I am watered, he ensures I bud.
To kneel in his shadow; effervescence
Is pushed away - If I feel really small,
Then it is due to his extensive presence:
As I absorb his member on a terrace,
Covered with crocuses from end to end,
Their beauty envelopes me, like the menace
I've packaged in my mouth, where I befriend
His cock head and the shaft, as he desires;
I suck; this tasting obviates my lot;
Watching his eyes, intent, as he admires
His movement in my throat: I'll squeeze a drop
That will become a rivulet - a flood:
As I am watered, he ensures I bud.
Published 27th Feb 2018
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27th Feb 2018 12:53pm
28th Feb 2018 1:15pm
Amazing piece dear..."His movement in my throat: I'll squeeze a drop
That will become a rivulet - a flood:
As I am watered, he ensures I bud" just perfect 😉
That will become a rivulet - a flood:
As I am watered, he ensures I bud" just perfect 😉
15th Mar 2018 6:42pm
