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Feeling Whole
Long legs lain in anticipation
wrapped up in the space
of the beauty
displayed in a way
blemishes smooth
a wispy sea
parting as light gleams
and breath rests
corners crease, put at ease
a peace inside of me
explored where hearts were tore
uncovered capitation
of time and tenderness
artistic renderings of reality
fruit snatched from the bowl
succulent juices flow
a finality
we're feeling whole
wrapped up in the space
of the beauty
displayed in a way
blemishes smooth
a wispy sea
parting as light gleams
and breath rests
corners crease, put at ease
a peace inside of me
explored where hearts were tore
uncovered capitation
of time and tenderness
artistic renderings of reality
fruit snatched from the bowl
succulent juices flow
a finality
we're feeling whole
Published 26th Feb 2018
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27th Feb 2018 00:56am
Reading this felt like a long, content sigh shared while gazing into a beloved’s eyes =) Wonderful expression, thank you for sharing such experience JusTim!
27th Feb 2018 1:20am
Anonymous
27th Feb 2018 10:07am
Contentment right there.
Lovely :)
Lovely :)
27th Feb 2018 12:48pm
28th Feb 2018 2:25pm
This is so sweet. Have you experienced the Courbet painting 'l'origine du monde'? Your first paragraph took me straight there...
28th Feb 2018 2:30pm
Anonymous
2nd Mar 2018 4:24pm
When the day has been long and difficult and you finally come home and can relax with a glass of wine...that's the feeling this one gives me. A long awaited sigh, much appreciated. Lovely, Tim :-)
2nd Mar 2018 4:45pm
