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When The Chase Ends
I run farther and farther till my legs collapse
Running from all the holes and traps
My breathe echo's heavily in my brain
as I try to rid myself of all the pain
My head is filled with terrible things
I feel like I have lost my wings
I curl in on myself and start to cry
I feel like I am telling everyone goodbye
Just as it started, it all went away
and I left with this feeling of dismay
Running from all the holes and traps
My breathe echo's heavily in my brain
as I try to rid myself of all the pain
My head is filled with terrible things
I feel like I have lost my wings
I curl in on myself and start to cry
I feel like I am telling everyone goodbye
Just as it started, it all went away
and I left with this feeling of dismay
Published 21st Feb 2018
| Edited 9th Mar 2018
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Stop cutting off your wings
P.s everyone: I know marina irl. I've been trying to help her through this. Thanks for making her feel accomplished.
P.s everyone: I know marina irl. I've been trying to help her through this. Thanks for making her feel accomplished.
21st Feb 2018 6:06pm
I like your poem a lot I can relate most of it to stuff im currently dealing with. a Title for this is tough. Your running away at first so maybe have that as part of the title? Sorry im not much help here.
21st Feb 2018 6:46pm
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2018 9:28am
Great job here.
A thought for the title, something like “When the Chase Ends”
Loved this
A thought for the title, something like “When the Chase Ends”
Loved this
22nd Feb 2018 4:34pm
