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Blackbird and a worm
There is tumult in the garden
Was it ever so ?
Watched a fight,
a blackbird and a worm.
It was ever so.
Did not stop
to take sides.
It was ever so.
Cannot live on bread alone,
do I ask him not to call
to warn me of a storm
because he killed a worm?
It was ever so.
His forecast sound as ever,
a dark side 'neath the feathers.
Yes ... ... ever so.
Published 21st Feb 2018
| Edited 22nd Feb 2018
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23rd Feb 2018 6:18pm
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2nd Mar 2018 8:28pm
hello , i liked reading this , its interesting to watch nature. i especially loved these lines
do I ask him not to call
to warn me of a storm
because he killed a worm?
i'm not sure what the deeper meaning to this is , but i enjoyed reading this , regardless.
do I ask him not to call
to warn me of a storm
because he killed a worm?
i'm not sure what the deeper meaning to this is , but i enjoyed reading this , regardless.
2nd Mar 2018 8:41pm
When accepting help and freindship we must not be too critical of anothers way of life Thanks for calling Daffodil 32
